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Review of chapter "BS:VH II Decisions to Be Made" from (Current Donor)Katrina
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Okay, I don't do this often, but I had to stop at this chapter and actually write you a review. The "Bert, I've brought you money," was fall down laughing awesome.

Thank you. And from what I can see of other reviews (and having read the previous story), I know I have a lot of good to look forward to....

Thanks for sharing, again, in case I don't mention it later.. :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [11 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Remember, you're gay, Willow.

... you are a hilARious writer. love love love it!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "BS:VH II Decisions to Be Made" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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"That was quick. I think I've found Anya's soulmate."

You do such a great job of portraying both Buffy and Anita; love it!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from (Past Donor)Dianasis
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This has to be the 10th or 11th time I've read this story and it's still a favorite. Great use of characters, although I'm a little squicked by some of the Raina bits. (Understandable for Anita-verse)

Couple of typos - "None the same" - mix of "none the less" and "just the same"
Several more scattered through this and the first story. I could do an edit for you if you'd like? Let me know.
Review By [(Past Donor)Dianasis] • Date [3 Oct 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from spring
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Oh um... wow. This is once again wonderful.
Review By [spring] • Date [26 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from MadBrilliant
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if there isn't already, there should be something about asher and willow in sunnydale
Review By [MadBrilliant] • Date [8 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from BlameyFomorrii
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"We stood and watched from the safety of the lobby. Asher had replaced his helmet and was holding Willow in his arms, protecting her from the abusive elements. I looked down at the blackened sidewalk as she completed her incantation. A violet glow consumed them both in a matter of seconds. They stared at us through the glass wall of the building. We couldn't hear her of course, but her words were universal ... goodbye."

--So sweet! (Very smart of Asher-he knew he was going with Willow, and you never know if it's daylight out on the other side of a dimensional jump.



Uggh! Very...sad ending on the Buffy side of things.


Great sequal. Usually, the sequals can't hold a flame to the greatness of the first (anything)-but I think this was probably even better. So, will the next one be divided up between the two worlds, or are Willow and Asher never to be heard from again?



Thanks for writing this!! >.~
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [24 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from BlameyFomorrii
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"
"Who's the asshole in the jeep!"

Richard scowled. "That would be Anita."

Oh. "--Funny

"
My lips thinned into a regretful smile. "I'm leaving, Buffy. There's trouble and I have to help the gang. I brought through something evil when I arrived, now I have to make it right.""

---Yay, Willow! You're redeemed for sure in my eyes...(well, in this fic world, you are)

Loved this chapter. Is everyone going through? Can they get back? Or, is it just Asher going through with Willow, because everyone has duties in the Anita world, but Asher has to be with Willow?

Great chapter!
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [24 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from BlameyFomorrii
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""What, are you a boy scout or something?"

His smile turned into a smirk. "I don't think I've ever been called that before.""
--Giggle

Okay, "Logical Willow" is "First Willow"-I can just see it now. Freak.


"I looked up into the sky and understood what must be done."--So, Willow is going back to her world to be the hero. (I think I may like that better than the army of mini-slayers)
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [24 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from BlameyFomorrii
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"I felt absolutely wooed. Boy, he shur do talk purddy. Hold on ... did he say beautiful? "-Aww, Cute!

And, I just HAD to look up what Saule meant:

"is the Lithuanian Sun godess, treated as a feminine deity in Lithuanian mythology. Saulė is the general name for the Sun in Lithuanian. She is one of the most powerful deities, the goddess of life and prolificacy. Saulė provides the warmth of nature, and fertility. She is patroness of all misfortunates, especially orphans, since she is the only substitute of a mother’s warmth, and because of this, she is known as the Universal Mother. The Lithuanian word for "the world", pasaulis, is translated as "the place under the Sun". Souls of the dead travel with Saulė to the underworld, which people believed is behind the horizon. It was considered an offence to point at the Sun or Moon because of their association with the God and Goddess. It was said that bad spirits sleep when Saulė is shining in the sky."

-According to Wikipedia. That really fits with Buffy's title of Lupa, and Willow's ability to heal vampires, raise and put to rest the dead, and her terrible vengence/dark side. Cool!

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"As of now I still have free will. I cannot allow you to add further to my enslavement."

I turned to him. "Asher, you have to believe me I never meant ..."

"I know. That is why I must not touch you, nor you me.""

--Enslavement = Love. He's already been a slave to it-and he, and Julianna, were burned. (Sorry)

I LOVED this chapter! Asher and Willow have MUCH in common-they are both with the self flogging over not being able to save their women, both have been scarred-one physically/mentally, one mentally/mentally.


This was wonderful. I really like this couple idea-and I even like Willow in this story (Not something that's happened in quite a while)
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [24 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from BlameyFomorrii
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That was gross-but really fun. Yay, bitch Buffy!
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [23 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from BlameyFomorrii
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That was gross-but really fun. Yay, bitch Buffy!
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [23 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from BlameyFomorrii
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That was gross-but really fun. Yay, bitch Buffy!
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [23 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from BlameyFomorrii
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""Buffy, I've never heard of this type of challenge. A lot of us have taken on more than one opponent in battle, but not in the challenge circle. Are you sure you can do this?"

I smiled. "It's the one on one fights that I have trouble with, Richard. Groups are no problem. I can throw a third in if it makes you feel better."

All three of them almost screamed. "NO!""

-The group isn't any fun-they don't believe in Buffy. Well, now she'll show 'em! Yup yup!


Great chapter!
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [23 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from BlameyFomorrii
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Ohh-cute. Willow's crushing on Buffy. Hmm. Actually, it's kinda creepy.

Loved this chapter!
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [23 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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