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Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from ChefJackButler
Review:
Too much angst, not enough "get to the point already". You take six chapters to do what should only take two to accomplish.
Review By [ChefJackButler] • Date [12 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from CindyB
Review:
Holy crap, I missed the next chapter for a whole year and a half. How the heck does that happen????? Anyway, I am still really enjoying it and it still really needs finishing....Really!

Cindy B.
Review By [CindyB] • Date [7 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)DeacBlue
Review:
Way too much characterization, way too little plot.
Comments from author:
LMAO. Thanks. ;)
Review By [(Current Donor)DeacBlue] • Date [8 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from TrevaRea
Review:
I hope you continue this. It's a very interesting and engaging premise.

Please continue it.

Treva
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [TrevaRea] • Date [19 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Glumski
Review:
Oh come on! I started reading this right now and have been waiting for The Big Meeting since chapter six! And it still didn't happen! Seriously, this is driving me crazy!
Well. To say it differently, this story is great. Really, really good. I absolutely love the characters, especially that little family you made of Faith, Buffy and Dawn. Many have attempted that and I have never read it sounding so natural and perfect. Also the relationships between... well... everyone and Buffy (seriously, I never saw that Pike thing coming and the premise with Joyce being both fake-memory-mother and aunt is just awesome) are done very well.
You might be overdoing it with the emotional retrospective scenes. While they convey the emotions dramatically they become a little boring after twelve chapters. Or maybe I was just reading too fast (trying to get to The Big Meeting). I have to say though that Chapter Five is absolutely beautiful. Even if the rest had sucked (which it doesn't, quite the opposite) it would have been worth a rec.
Also that mud fight scene caught me completely off-guard and made me feel a little fuzzy inside. It's so... happy. It was nice seeing Buffy in a situation that neither General-Buffy nor Cheerleader-Buffy would have been in. I don't know why it is this scene that had such a deep impact on me - it's rather insignificant and small in comparison to lots of other parts - but I'm glad you wrote it.

Well, I hope you'll update soon! Maybe even with The Big Meeting though I guess it'll be a few chapters from now. This story still seems to be in the build-up phase instead of full crossover mode though you managed to surprise me more than once so far already.
Comments from author:
Thank you. There will be more hopefully soonish. I lost my springboard and kinda got rudderless for a while. Plus RL was going crazy. :)
Review By [Glumski] • Date [2 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireWolfe
Review:
I hope that this work is not dead. IT has so much potential pardont he pun. I want to see how Sam handles it.
Comments from author:
It's not dead. Promise.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [20 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from jebbypal
Review:
Interesting set up.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [jebbypal] • Date [19 Mar 14] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Willimer
Review:
I really hope you continue this story
id love to see some Buffy and Jack interaction, I love how alike the two are, the blond acting dull routine they both do as a defence but both being such great leaders, and ive always thought Buffy would be able to help Jack properly grieve Charlie's death
hope you have more for us soon
Comments from author:
There is more coming. Sooner or later. Hopefully sooner.
Review By [Willimer] • Date [27 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from etraytin
Review:
Interesting story, a different twist on the monk-built memories, having them strengthen a reality that isn't actually real. I'm really liking your characterization for Faith as well. I'd love to see more of this story!
Comments from author:
Thanks. :)
Review By [etraytin] • Date [18 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Ember
Review:
I don't even like Stargate but I'm so obsessed with Buffy I'll read almost anything, that being said, this is an amazing story and I really hope it doesn't end up abandoned! Love the relationships you have between Faith, Buffy and Dawn but what is up with Faith and her random weakness and pains? Does she have a disease or something mystical going on or is it really just old slayer age? I love this story and I really can't wait for the meeting, please update again at your earliest convenience and Happy Holidays!
Comments from author:
I loved Stargate. So much sass. So wonderful. Except for Stargate Universe. I don't know what happened there. The whole pain and weakness for Faith will be revealed. There is a reason behind it. And I will say it relates back to being a Slayer. Thank you for the review and your words, they were lovely.
Review By [Ember] • Date [22 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from bradsan
Review:
read it again and still waiting for a update.

Hope it won't take long because I want to read more.

Oh can't wait for Oz to show up. Wonder how he will react when he find out the threw Buffy out or her own house without any weapon to defend herself. I still don't like Riley. Riley is good looking but he already proved you can't trust him. He has nothing to do with the missing potentials I hope. I know nothing points at him but I can't shake the feeling he knows something.

Owww Ripper is showing. Putting Kennedy with Andrew is so evil. Still think he made a big mistake letting Kennedy and Buffy work together never mind the reasons he gives.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [14 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Compston
Review:
Very interesting story Can't wait for the next chapter and hopefully soon Buffy and Sam will be reunited.... and they figure out why a lot of potentials are disappearing...
Comments from author:
Oh yes...so much to come.
Review By [Compston] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Compston
Review:
Wow its getting a little better...
Comments from author:
LMAO
Review By [Compston] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Compston
Review:
Another chapter down
Comments from author:
Lol
Review By [Compston] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Compston
Review:
Interesting chapter and a little confusing at the beginning. But, at the end I think I know what your going for. It looks like it will work. Keep it up....
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Compston] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Rating [5 out of 10]
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