Review of chapter "The Master and The Monster" from BuffyKaibaHunt
Very brilliant and awesome, as well as very creative, too.
"At long last." The Master said. "It was somewhat ironic, the Slayer killing me the night I escaped. After waiting for so long." The Master put his hand on the younger vampire's shoulder. "It will be even more Ironic when she arives home to discover her friends and family slaughtered by me."
"That won't be necessary." The Anointed One said. "She's coming he-" The boy was cut off by a blood-chilling scream. The Master turned just in time to see one of the vampire's pulled up into the rafters. The others scrambled about. Shouts of rage and fear echoed across the Warehouse. The Master heard someone shout "The Slayer" in a panic moments before something pulled him into the shadows, then there was the sound of flesh being ripped. Then the vampires began to panic.
The Master was enraged, he was just about to scream for order when something cut the Anointed one in half. The Master leapt sideways in shock and caught sight of a glowing disk arc high into the air before disapearing into the shadows. THis was not the work of the slayer. Not her work at-
From the shadows something massive roared and the panicking vampires began to charge. He leapt atop the stone tablet, shouting at the fleeing vampires. Berating them for their cowardace. One turned looked at him, looked back into the shadows of the the Warehouse before saying:
"It was nice knowing you Sir!" The vampire said before he turned and ran.
The Master felt himself go red with rage.
"Who the Hell do you think you are?!?!?!" The Master demanded.
"'IT WAS NICE KNOWING YOU SIR!'" The being echoed from the shadows.
"Come out and face me!"
"'WHO THE HELL DO YOU THINK YOU ARE?'" The creature screamed back, before stepping into the light. The Master smiled.
"It's only one of you." He laughed. "Do you know how many of your kind I've killed?"
The creature only echoed his laugh, extending its wristblades and issueing a challenge.
Awesome job writing this! :)
Review By [BuffyKaibaHunt
] • Date [21 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Master and The Monster" from eriktheviking
A great story, well written and with the unusual feature of none of the central characters being present. Thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking
] • Date [13 Apr 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Master and The Monster" from Turel
I liked it a lot. Although I'd love to see the fight between the The Master and the Predator.
Review By [Turel
] • Date [22 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Master and The Monster" from CPTSkip
Now this story of yours was just too cool! I wonder who would come out the winner if a Master Predator went up against the Mayor or Glory? Lol! Now I've to new things to think about. Ah, geekhood is just so wonderful.
Review By [CPTSkip
] • Date [22 Jan 07] • Not Rated