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Original of the Species 2A, The Mayor & the Saiyan

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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Omegaprime
Review:
OMG, Angelus and co vamped Ethan? now thats nasty.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [5 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Appendix" from RafMereC
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Another great story.
Loved it.
Raf.
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [10 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Appendix" from Ansku
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Well, I skipped the prologue to the next part since I'm going there right away, but that aside it's going great :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [14 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Appendix" from TheHeartist
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Where's the next part?! Going crazy here! just kidding, but seriously, two months?
Comments from author:
Well, life tends to get in the way at times. I'm currently working on chapter 5 after a month long stalemate. That may not seem far but so far that's 300 pages worth of material. So I am still doing my best.
Review By [TheHeartist] • Date [2 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Appendix" from TheHeartist
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I love this series, the character of Belmovekk is so dynamic, funny, not to mention bloody cool! And I like how the characters have DBZ fighting abilities changes so much within the storyline itself, yet a lot of the outcomes appear to be the same, it's good stuff. When's the next part?!
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it. Makes me twirl my moustache in glee.

Rest assured, it might go fast, it might go slow, I will continue this story. Hopefully fast. The next part is being worked on. Two chapters finished, still 10 to 11 to go. Although when I finish the next two chapters I'll start posting some.
Review By [TheHeartist] • Date [26 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Appendix" from EvenMoreCookies
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Oh, the edict comes back to bite them in the ass...good. Making peace with the forces of evil can't be of the good.
Review By [EvenMoreCookies] • Date [23 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Appendix" from janusi
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Read the preview and I like it. Don't know about Faith going bad, always thought she fitted better on the good side.
Review By [janusi] • Date [23 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Rob
Review:
Boy, Giles was a total asshole in this one. Using Daniel, ignoring Faith, and probably corrupting Willow. Got the feeling this is going to cause some big problems down the road.

And does Buffy need an attitude adjustment? The guys is 4000 years old, she's 17. She has no real right to 'all his secrets'. Geez, she really needs to get over the pedophile vamp.

Anyway, another fine part.


Rob
Comments from author:
Bear in mind, Willow did not know the specifics of this particular spell. Giles omitted the 'oh, and it will drain most of the life of the grounder' part. If she had been an experienced magic user she probably would have known, but now her inexperience came in helpful. Maybe that makes him an asshole. Maybe it makes him somebody who will do whatever it takes. I leave that judgment up to you.

As for Buffy, she's an normal girl put into an extra-ordinary situation and put through extra-ordinary events. His secrets have affected her. And there are more to come. Muhahaha!
Review By [Rob] • Date [20 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Bluesnowman
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Awesome chapter.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [20 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Bluesnowman
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Goos work.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [18 Feb 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [15 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from EvenMoreCookies
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You can't seriously have Giles and Willow kill Daniel for some ritual! Thats so completely out of character. Yeah, Giles killed Ben, but he was more or less a bad guy, and there was simply no way to kill Glory without killing him too since they were the same. He wouldn't go all human sacrifice based on some prophecy from a voice in his head. And Willow would never allow it, much less help.
Review By [EvenMoreCookies] • Date [15 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Iceflame
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I can see a more astute Xander gritting his teeth and making an "apology" like that. I added quotation marks cause I don't believe he was wrong to betray Buffy's trust that way. I figure I'll wait to see how he reacts to Angel coming back.
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [14 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Rob
Review:
Interesting part. But to tell the truth, I just can't see Giles using Daniel like that. And if he did, and Buffy or Xander found out...

Rob
Comments from author:
I think Giles is capable of such, as he had no qualms killing Ben, was willing to let Woods kill Spike and pump Buffy full of Cruciamentum drugs when she turned 18. There is Giles the goofy Librarian, who looks cute and cuddly, and there is Ripper, who can be ruthless and kill. He's not one or the other, he's both.

As fr Daniel, ind in the end Daniel won't be killed by what happened here. All he took is what Daniel wasn't going to miss anyway, since he dies from radiation poisoning and ascended within a year. The way I saw it, he knew Daniel was going to die, but not the how and exact when. Nothing he could do to prevent that. And in closing, this is fated. The Necessities basically gave him this solution in their prophecy.
Review By [Rob] • Date [14 Feb 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from superbrutal
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Now I wonder how B was able to pull this miracle off.

Or is he really Anubis, in his body. But I can't see B falling for something like that.
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [12 Feb 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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