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Review of chapter "All quiet on the Western Front" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Oooops! no Helmets in 1915! Didn't get issued 'till 1916. Silly quibble but thats just me!

A nice piece of writing really got the feeling of the winter of '15, well done.

Have you by chance read my 'Over the Top' fic (said he shamelessly looking for more hits!).

All the best,
Comments from author:
Quibble away! Attention to detail is a virtue, not a sin. *g*

Meanwhile, I wonder if I can claim that they were, of course, helmets that the lads had 'acquired' from the bunch of German cavalry that they had a run in with early in the campaign, and which they now display as trophies of war ... Hmm. Possibly not!

Perhaps I should just go change it to 'caps' in the cause of accuracy ...

Loved 'Over the Top' - but I went and looked again, just to get your hit count up! :-)
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [19 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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