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Review of chapter "11" from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Comments from author:
Cool
Review By [Elleria] • Date [26 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "11" from neverwill
Review:
I don't read much Smallville fic, but I really enjoyed this and wouldn't mind seeing more of this Lex/Clark combo.
Comments from author:
Thanks, There are two Crack! sequals Potential what now is up right now for more of the pairing.
Review By [neverwill] • Date [4 Sep 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "11" from SwedishFrog
Review:
Oh this is soooo great!!! *runs of to read the rest*
Comments from author:
glad you are enjoying it.
Review By [SwedishFrog] • Date [20 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "11" from Rivana
Review:
Ohhh, lovely series. Though I do resent Bruce being picked on so much, just the slightest bit. But I love the rest and tyhe subtle crossovers are gold of course. ^^
Comments from author:
Thank you, I was surpised how mean i ended up being to Bruce as well. Thanks. And a few I mentioned are going to be part of the mini sequels!
Review By [Rivana] • Date [7 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "11" from RevDorothyL
Review:
I can't believe I overlooked that whole "need yellow sunlight" thing all this time (what with Clark being already slightly depleted because of extended rainfall blocking out some of the sunlight, and then the total absence of sunlight in the batcave later)! Great finale, and I look forward to the sequels.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I had fun finding ways to work that in without being obvious. Glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [6 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "11" from nightslayer
Review:
poor dick, his beautiful bike!! and oh yeah. . . . .'pants' very hot scean between clark and lex, gave me all types of yummy images.
Comments from author:
glad you enjoyed it!
Review By [nightslayer] • Date [5 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "11" from mrpage
Review:
Loved it!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [mrpage] • Date [5 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "11" from heathenseyes
Review:
I loved it; especially the Clark and Lex pairing! Thanks for sharing!!

Any chance of a sequel?
Comments from author:
Thank you,

And yes there are... 2 I have in mind and a chance for a larger 3rd but that's still iffy.

Hmm maybe I should add a note to the end.
Review By [heathenseyes] • Date [5 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "11" from purrfus
Review:
Okay - color me confused. How is this complete? While the last chapter is interesting, there is no resolution.

Clark and Lex have admitted interest in one another, but the Bad guys are still at large and plotting on both sides is still a work in progress. Bruce is still be a bigoted idiot, and Dick is just hanging.

The character interaction and dialog have been great, and it seemed as though everything was building to a complex climax, and then nothing. Its as if someone tore a book in half, and I would really like to know where the other half is.
Comments from author:
Clark and Lex admitted an interest in each other and are planning to pursue a relationship.

Bad guys? Lucas = arrested, only bad guy. Complex climax with Lucas? Not really possible he isn't that smart, Lex played him in that meeting to a T. And had enhanced backup because he knew Lucas would try to shoot him. Lucas' plan was sadly simple - kidnap Lex, blow up Lex and the kidnappers, become luthor heir then kill lionel and keep all the billions to himself similar to what the Lucas on the show wanted to a greater extreme.

Bruce isn't a bad guy no matter how much of a jerk he is. After what happened he is the type of character to watch Clark's every move and be ready to deal with him when he shows his true colors. As of right now he's licking his wounds, the two most important people in his life just ripped him a new one.

The universe isn't done, there will be a couple of sequels that will be short and show more of the clark Lex relationship and the little army. But all the purposes of Rain have been filled.
IE:
Clark's Secret/illness
Chloe's involvement with meteor mutants
Clark and Lex's feelings for each other
Dick beginning to spread his wings as Nightwing (who he becomes once he breaks with batman) with a layover in Smallville before Bludhaven
Some ideas of what the world outside of smallville is like.

ps email me if you feel like discussing it more.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [5 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "11" from RyenSelenityCaliburn
Review:
This was awesome Clark and Lex are such a cute couple! Are you gonna write a sequal or anything? I really enjoy your writing.
Ryen
Comments from author:
I have two mini sequels planned that take care of any loose ends.

But we're not those kinds of Mutants and Potential what now?
Review By [RyenSelenityCaliburn] • Date [5 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "10" from RevDorothyL
Review:
I'm really enjoying this alternate, 'kinder and gentler' view of much of the early seasons of Smallville -- where many of the "meteor freaks" who went postal on the show end up being decent enough kids who just have some extra issues to deal with, and where Lex learns Clark's full secret at a point before he's become committed to anything remotely like a path of evil.

Also, you've done a stellar job of portraying Batman as a psycho who (if we're talking about the Christian Bale version) seems to be letting his unfortunate past relationship with the immortal Ra's al Ghul and his jealousy over Lex turn him into exactly the kind of monster he most despises. I'm ready to drop him on his head, myself!

Looking forward to the next update, whenever you're ready to post it.
Comments from author:
Thanks hope you enjoy the last bit just as much!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [17 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "10" from nightslayer
Review:
BAS bruce! go to your room. . . .hehehehe . . .guess hes already there! YAY cloe!
Comments from author:
That he is.
Review By [nightslayer] • Date [16 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "10" from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [Elleria] • Date [16 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "10" from Morrigan
Review:
Gotta tell you, I love your Lex! *___* He knows the rules, know how the pieces move in the big scheme of things... he's awesome *blushing*

Dick also gained my respect today. I expect Bruce to crawl for forgiveness for a long time (if Lex doesn't kill him on sight first)
Comments from author:
Lex does rock.

Bruce will have to crawl maybe over glass to get forgiveness!
Review By [Morrigan] • Date [15 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "10" from RyenSelenityCaliburn
Review:
This is awesome! I just started it today and wasn't able to stop until I got to the last chapter! It's very interesting and I can't wait to see where you're going to take everything! I'm looking forward to reading your next chapter!!!
Ryen
Comments from author:
Thank you! Glad you are enjoying it.

More soon I hope things are wrapping up!
Review By [RyenSelenityCaliburn] • Date [15 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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