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Review of chapter "The not so "Silent Space Meeting."" from KrisB
Review:
Please, run with this some time. I just stumbled across the "Just Another Rift or is it?" and was thrilled reading it. I actually wondered if they had stumbled into Macross or Robotech at first.

Reading this one, it a great setup. It only seemed like a bad thing. Rifts now has easy access to a space port. Or they will in a few chapters. I could easily see them mining the rock that they are on for a station and using all that ice for basic water needs. Let's just hope that they are "discovered" by friendlies and not those looking to enslave another set of humans...

Oh, who are we kidding. With with way that you've got this Xander, were ever he goes he will cause massive change. I predict lots of humans stopping by and helpng kick off the various demons/aliens on Rifts. Xander has pretty much said that their job was to guard the Rift. Hmm, Will he end up planting an entire series of trees in various worlds?
Review By [KrisB] • Date [15 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The not so "Silent Space Meeting."" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Thanx for providing the write-up for the Xander Character sheet. It does give a bit more info on his development. He has been doing a lot of bonding with a lot of different types. What additions did the bonding with the wife add? Any dragon thrown in there? How bout alpha perks? Try throwing in a leader on this or the more curent story... Do you plan on continuing this one? B5 or ST or SW? Hell, forbidden planet?
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [1 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The not so "Silent Space Meeting."" from Jhawksun
Review:
please update this story. I love it
Review By [Jhawksun] • Date [6 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One-Alexander LaVelle Harris" from nemogbr
Review:
I like the way you empowered the Pack.

I had problems that you may turn Xander into a Mary Sue character, but with the enemy being so much more powerful, it does make it logical.

Basic Skills of a Ground Trooper including Power Armour:Pilot does not make any major impact on game play. Then again a whole division turned from ordinary humans to professional soldiers would be fascinating.

To recap, I would presume that all who undergo the ritual ends up with these powers:

Sea Titan attributes as supernatural creatures.
Hyena senses equal to DogPAck R.C.C.


Master Psychic abilities:
Mind Block auto defense
Telemechanics
Total Recall.

I did find it incongruous that Sea Titans do not have automatic psionics, but thought they should develop them in time.

Mindblock and Total Recall are most definitely needed in a Rifts setting and for beings who are effectively immortal.

I did think of them as human form Chiang Ku Dragons.

If you still need a beta reader. I am game for the job.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.
If you want to beta this one as well. I'm all for it.
Thank you.
Raf.
Review By [nemogbr] • Date [8 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The not so "Silent Space Meeting."" from aerie
Review:
Thanks for the update.

Suggested plot twist: Rifts Japan.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Raf.
Review By [aerie] • Date [8 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The not so "Silent Space Meeting."" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Raf.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [14 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The not so "Silent Space Meeting."" from Dragonelf
Review:
Yay, a new chapter.

::Feeds the plot bunny::


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Imagination is more important than knowledge, for knowledge
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Comments from author:
Thank you.
Raf.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [13 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The not so "Silent Space Meeting."" from MistofRainbows
Review:
Ah good to see the continuation of the old story. I've missed reading it.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Raf.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [13 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The not so "Silent Space Meeting."" from Ahdamnit
Review:
Not much happened so I can't really say much other then I hope to see more.
Comments from author:
I am starting back up with this fic.
But I'm going to go slow until I get a Beta.

Looking for Betas for this and my other Fics

anyone wanting to apply.

rafmere@gmail.com or you can reply to my Betas post in the Forums.

Thank you.
Raf.
Review By [Ahdamnit] • Date [13 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Frozen Space" from Ahdamnit
Review:
Please don't abandon this. Seeing it updated would be really great.
Comments from author:
Its not abandoned.
I have been in retraining at work for the last few month.
Life just got too busy to do anything else.
I have been working on it. I'll post what I have and other stories I have been able to get as well.

Raf
Thank for the encouragement.
Review By [Ahdamnit] • Date [23 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Frozen Space" from Schiavona
Review:
It's really nice too see this story/verse continue. I really like the Rifts crossover and watching how the scale of interaction continues to grow.

It would be interesting to see how Xander and his Slayers would respond if they come to the Southwest and run into Rifts vampires and the Vampire Intelligences. I could see Xander with a gauss rifle firing MDC wooden stakes real fast.

If you go that way and need a contact in Merctown that knows that area let me know.

I hope to see this story continue soon.
Review By [Schiavona] • Date [20 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One-Alexander LaVelle Harris" from djhardim
Review:
Interesting, but what do the numbers mean?
Comments from author:
I'll add a link to my homepage to explain the numbers

Thanks
Raf
Review By [djhardim] • Date [4 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One-Alexander LaVelle Harris" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Comments from author:
Thank You
Raf
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [4 Jun 07] • Not Rated
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