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Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from agnar
Review:
While parts of this were good, mostly the bits focused around Xander, other parts just seemed to spread yourself too thin, going off in too many directions and having too many convenient things popping up.

Rose, Kyle, etc. knowing Buffy-verse folks from before, a bit too many of those things. The entire bit with Dawn just didn't work at all for me, found myself just skipping those bits for lack of caring.

The various other bits that weren't centered around the Scooby gang or the titans, like Warren and whoever was going to kill the Mayor and the speed force bit...

Just too much stuff, forced into a far too short story to this point. Focus on the scoobs and titans first, build that bit up, other stuff can come in later, it'd work better.
Review By [agnar] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from misterwhy
Review:
story has great potential.

please update
Review By [misterwhy] • Date [28 Jul 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from CageFire
Review:
Interesting story. Too bad it hasn't updated in nearly 5 years.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [30 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great story, please write more!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [24 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from eternalfox
Review:
So, what happened with Oz...I mean he was clearly interested in Willow since the episode with the mummy. They must have met since they were both offered the same job offer by that technology firm. I think mainly because there was no Order of Teraka around trying to eliminate Buffy; then he wouldn't have gotten shot trying to protect Willow which definitely put him on her radar. However, that hasn't happened here it seems; which begs the question, with his super hearing...wouldn't Xander hear Oz talking about his interest in Willow to Devon? Besides, it's kinda been established that he's more into strong, confident women...which, sorry to say...Willow most certainly is not at this point in time.
Review By [eternalfox] • Date [20 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from dabraning
Review:
Update please
Review By [dabraning] • Date [11 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Nice piece of work! Please consider writing more of it!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [17 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Iamthewalrus
Review:
Was a nice reread, wish you'd return to it.

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Review By [Iamthewalrus] • Date [29 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Nice. Good to see an accepting Joyce, the new history hangs together well.
Cool power for Dawn
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [22 Apr 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from BoosterBronze
Review:
I was on my third, maybe fourth reread of this, and realized, I had yet to review it. Had to even go to my own profile to double check. I've gotta say, while I love Under an Iron Moon, this is actually my favorite work of yours. You can see the twelve kinds of shite Xander's slowly stirring up around him, while he's fumbling around trying to get a grip on what defines 'Him'.

I like the interweaving you've done with the OYL Teen Titans stuff, while slowly pushing it further and further from canon. Hell, you've done a better job then Geoff did making me like the plot lines, and explanations for what was happening in that period. That in and of itself is a hell of an accomplishment.

I like the by play with Batman in Sunnydale 'stalking' Buffy, and especially the rather well done shot on Angel you managed with it.

I'm curious to see where you're going with Jericho, you seem to have plans for him, though I may be wrong there, but you've put a bit of characterization in there, and managed to make him come off a bit more human then I would've expected, and the dialogue between him and Buffy in particular seems to be leading to a more well developed character.

Anywho, hope to see new chapters of this soon.
Review By [BoosterBronze] • Date [19 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from dabraning
Review:
Any chance of you picking this back up, with the Wondergirl, Supergirl, Willow, & Xander square forming up it was really getting great.
Review By [dabraning] • Date [12 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from eternalfox
Review:
How will Xander let Willow down? I mean, Connor's memories are leading him towards Cassie. His own led him to Buffy and Kara (kinda). Xander is attracted to strong-willed women, which Willow (in the beginning) certainly isn't.
Review By [eternalfox] • Date [18 Apr 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Brimmstone
Review:
Mythbusters has been right about once every several hundred myths. I have several arrows on my mantle that have been Robin Hooded. All it takes is good aim and hitting it just right.
Review By [Brimmstone] • Date [27 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Dragonelf
Review:
I hope you will get inspired to update this story.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Apple Crisp::

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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [19 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Vilkath
Review:
I rather liked this story in many ways and I hope it gets updated again some time. I liked how several girls started to show some interest in Xander, how he had super hotties hitting on him as well as Willow, Dawn and possibly a more interseted Buffy in this story. If it had continued I would wonder where it might be going, far to many stories of this type end of one of two ways. They either have a badly written harem start up, or suddenly Xander finds 'true love' with one girl and basicaly ignores all the others that until that moment seemed to have a real connection with him.

One of my favorite cross overs set in the DC world will always be Terminal Justice, the one dealing with Mr. Black. But I felt that story did what most DC stories do, introduce a bunch of hot girls interseted in a character then just pick one in the end and ignore the previous flirting.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [7 Dec 10] • Not Rated
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