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Review of chapter "Observer" from LordSia
Review:
You know, random thought; I wonder how many girls have died because the Watchers mistook them for Slayers?
1 #Middle-aged Englishman Stalks Teenage Girl#
2 #Throws Knife At Said Girl#
3A #Gives "The World Is Older..." Speech/Gets The Hell Out Of Dodge And File An Error Report & Request Further Search For The Slayer#

A bit to random, not enough of a red thread. In Medias Res is tricky to work with, and your attempt needs a bit more polish...
Review By [LordSia] • Date [26 Dec 09] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Observer" from IcemanII
Review:
I just found this story. Its a lot of fun, but you haven't updated in some time. Any chance you will continue the story.
Review By [IcemanII] • Date [24 Jul 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Observer" from Morgomir
Review:
Nice idea. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [8 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wake-up Call" from (Past Donor)LiastraLee
Review:
Please, oh please, oh please write more!
Review By [(Past Donor)LiastraLee] • Date [8 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Observer" from Ramenth
Review:
Interesting so far; I'd love to read more.
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [11 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Observer" from Crydwyn
Review:
This looking like it could be quite interesting. Nice try with the cliffhanger but I don't believe you... some how I have a sneaking suspision that it's going to be poor 'Em' who dies not Buffy. So can't wait see what possible subtle differences earlier on will have on later cannon. Definitely looking forward to your next update.

~ Cry
Review By [Crydwyn] • Date [5 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wake-up Call" from ShayHalliwell
Review:
I haven't read your story, but I was reading reviews given by ChroniclesBailey and you wrote that you weren't sure how many baths the Summers house had? Well from what I saw it had one it was connected to the hall by a door and Joyce's later Willow's and Tara's room by a door. But than I could be wrong.
Review By [ShayHalliwell] • Date [5 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Observer" from firyra
Review:
Interesting premise can't wait to see how you introduce the Stargate show. Hope you post the next chapter soon.
Review By [firyra] • Date [28 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Observer" from Infinix
Review:
Okay this story is all kinds of mis representation. Xander Harris and the Dimensional PortKey. I don't know about everyone else but when I see this I think Xander will be the main character and it will have something to do with Harry Potter. When I saw it was Xander and Dawn Centered but Stargate I was a bit thrown and then when Xander was only mentioned once in the first two chapters and Stargate not at all I just thought WTF? Still I can't wait till you actually get to what the story is about.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [24 Aug 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Observer" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Nice job.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [24 Aug 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Observer" from link
Review:
Okay you are evil! Leaving a cliffie like that. I want to know what happens next quick! Pretty please?
Comments from author:
Heh, chapter won't likely be up until tomorrow, but here is a hint: Look at the title of the cliffhanger. Might give you a clue as to who the attacker is. o_-
Review By [link] • Date [24 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Observer" from VillageOrchid
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Well... you got a while to see where it is going, but so far so good. Looking forward to seeing where you might take this.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [23 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Observer" from Katza
Review:
Oh wow you are terribly cruel... I love it but if you leave us hanging too long I won't find it nearly as amusing and I shall start to chew fingernails, you wouldn't want to be responsible for my chewed fingernails now would you?
Review By [Katza] • Date [23 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Observer" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [23 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Observer" from rocky
Review:
Interesting idea, I think I'll do one similar. You know they say imitation is the highest form of flattery?
I encourage you to continue in the endeavor.
Review By [rocky] • Date [23 Aug 07] • Not Rated
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