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Review of chapter "Prologue: Walking Nightmares" from randyzoopurple
Review:
Wrappers that was good
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [27 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue: Walking Nightmares" from DemonicAngelC
Review:
I agree with the last review. This story definitly needs to be continued.
Review By [DemonicAngelC] • Date [30 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue: Walking Nightmares" from TwoBlackDragons
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Evil author = one who doesn't finish stories they start.
And this is a good story, so please stop being an evil author.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [4 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue: Walking Nightmares" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great first chapter, with well written fight scenes and a good cliffhanger at the end. Looking forward to the answers. Thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [13 Apr 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue: Walking Nightmares" from purrfus
Review:
Interesting beginning. Nice action sequence, always love to see creative use of weaponry.

Don't remember Buffy being a Regan fan, so I'm assuming its just witty repartee.

Before posting your next chapter, which I'm anticipating, try reading this one and the next out loud. If you can't imagine the dialog even on the little screen.....
Review By [purrfus] • Date [26 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue: Walking Nightmares" from (Current Donor)MaxGSandeman
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Restoring the family honour. Now what will that entail?
Loved the action. The vamps must have taken a leaf out of Mr Tricks book, what with all the guns.
Review By [(Current Donor)MaxGSandeman] • Date [26 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue: Walking Nightmares" from war
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wonder if the reason the Predator didn't kill Buffy was cause she's pregnant? good timing on the fic as I just saw the trailer for AvP 2 last night just hope its better than the first one.

good start looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [26 Aug 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue: Walking Nightmares" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
I see this is your first fic (on TTH anyway) not bad for a first time. Good bit of hand-to-hand action there at the end of the chapter, and some pretty good scene setting at the biginning. Vampires with guns add a whole new level of complexity to Slaying!

Check those typo's! I saw at least one 'to' that should have been 'too'. Also Please don't fall into 'The Blonde Slayer' trap! I noticed you referred to Buffy as 'The Woman' and so on...we've all done it, it sounds good in your head but it looks lame on the screen!

Buffy sounded right in my head, I look forward to see how you deal with other characters.

Hope you don't put 'Angel' in this story (I hate Angel) but its your story so you do what you think's best. I'm going to put a 'track' on this to see where you take it.

So who's the daddy?

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [26 Aug 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue: Walking Nightmares" from SamDragon
Review:
Interesting start.If she is in the state I think then what next and who is the daddy?
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [26 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue: Walking Nightmares" from ranlynn
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Ok...I know of only two reasons why a 'Predator' will ignore or let a victim go.

Either they are too weak to be considered a challenge or it's a pregnant female. And we all know Buffy isn't weak so....
Review By [ranlynn] • Date [25 Aug 07] • Not Rated
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