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El Xander

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bill
Review:
Good start!
Review By [Bill] • Date [3 Sep 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from neverwill
Review:
Not bad, but too rushed - need to flesh out the story more. Also, maybe at the end you can provide a translation of the Spanish words for those of us that don't speak any?
Review By [neverwill] • Date [3 Sep 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Please write a sequel or even just expand on this chapter. I like your setup, but your story was way too rushed. I want to see El Xander kick more butt and take more names. And maybe play some music for "his girls". Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [2 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)drdeth
Review:
Intresting start, but too short. Would make a good series
Review By [(Recent Donor)drdeth] • Date [2 Sep 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mcspender
Review:
The Mariachi belongs to the movie section of the site, in the letter "T" section to be precise.
And "The Mariachi" character? It was created by Robert Rodriguez, not by Quentin Tarantino.
It will be very good for you, to check your facts the next time my friend, whether movie facts or Spanish words.

See ya.
Comments from author:
Ok already fixed, sorry this was written a long time ago and I wanted to throw some wrong stuff in for the mood.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [1 Sep 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Interesting, but worth fleshing out a little more.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [1 Sep 07] • Not Rated
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