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Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from terrence
Review:
I adore this pairing! It was sweet and a large part of me enjoys watching the scoobies get dressed down. They were often a bit hollier than thou and really judgy.
Review By [terrence] • Date [14 Oct 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Rather good story!! I liked Buffy finally admitting to herself that she loved Jack! (Did she give up slaying? Was another slayer called?)
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [21 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from AtotheM
Review:
A solid little story, you really took huge leaps forward between this story and 'The Surrogate.' It was a great idea though, and I hope you keep writing stories for this pairing :) I really love the two of them together. Love Jack running down to the delivery room in his shorts! Thanks for the fun entertainment!
Review By [AtotheM] • Date [7 Aug 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from serenityselena
Review:
awesome story ...
original plot .... nice twists ....
^_^
Comments from author:
Thank you for taking the time to review this work. I am glad someone still reading my work even though I haven't posted a story in 2 yrs. I am trying to work on my other story but most of my work was on a flash drive and its missing so I have to re written several chapters that was already written. Thanks once again, please continue to review my work.
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [9 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from veslefrick
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aww! that's really cute. That beginning was a bit slow and boring (no offense...) but you really caught me up, and I couldn't take a break while reading the story :)
Review By [veslefrick] • Date [13 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Current Donor)DeacBlue
Review:
I enjoyed it, but there was a chapter or two that was far too graphic for a story told to a child of six, which you are framing this in.
Review By [(Current Donor)DeacBlue] • Date [6 Jun 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from winnie
Review:
delightful story...looking for the rest of your stories.
Comments from author:
Thank you...
Review By [winnie] • Date [6 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)DeacBlue
Review:
The characterization of Buffy, being so literary and verbose, was so OOC that it threw me out of my comfort zone in reading this. I know sometimes that's what you shoot for, but I get the idea that you were just tryin to set the stage, and it didn't do well for that.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [(Current Donor)DeacBlue] • Date [24 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Keshkreature
Review:
Wow, that was really great. I loved the buildup all the way to the "I love yous," and I'm glad everyone got back to right in the end.
Comments from author:
Thank you. This story practically wrote it self. I wish the others were as quick as Second Chance.
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [7 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Mamodo
Review:
Nice story but I think Alex is a little bit too young for the part about his parents and their sexual joy! XD
As Bufy tells him the story you should have let this part out.

~Mamo~
Comments from author:
Sorry for taking so long to answer you. Regarding the story, even though Buffy is telling the story to Alex, I don't believe she tell every single detail like the Love making. I think that part is just a memory of that time--we the readers see it through her eyes, but she probably skipped over that part... at least she did in my head. Which child want to hear about their parents having sex, I don't. And not Buffy especially. Remember how she react to Giles and her mom.
Review By [Mamodo] • Date [11 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from BrownFinderth
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Great, loveable story line here. I'm so happy for Buffy, that she's able to live a common life (yet, still retain her slayer powers), with a husband and children!
If the author chose to do a sequel to this story, yes, I would definitely read it.
Comments from author:
Hello!
You are not the first person to ask to a sequel to this story. I do have an idea, but I don't write as fast as I use to. But If anyone willing to do this story justice and write a sequel I would love it.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [8 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Dragonelf
Review:
I hope you get inspired to write a sequel to this story.

:: Feeds the plot bunny ::
Comments from author:
thank you... i might :-)
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [8 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
Review:
Great story! I'm glad you took the time to write it. Not only write it, but finish it out as well. I can't wait to read more of your stories :)
Comments from author:
Thank you for taking the time out for reviewing this story. I mean so much to me. As a writer, I look forward to the reviews, be it good or not so good. Thanks once again.
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [30 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from manic
Review:
It cracked me up that Jack tried to hurry up the wedding! And I loved that the gang came in right when Jack and Buffy were announced as man and wife. I have a feeling that Jack would have immediately verbally and loudly objected to people calling his child a demon ;)
Comments from author:
Objection from Jack...probably, but I think he didn't know what was going on. seeing that Buffy was missing his friends, he of course call them. He had expect them to come to visit, but not at the moment as he was saying his vows.

But as the door bell rang, he just knew that it was Buffy friends.
Review By [manic] • Date [29 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from manic
Review:
O’Neill,” he called. “I have brought you the mother of your child.”

Oh, I can't wait to see what Jack says to that! I liked this chapter much better than the first. The first just seemed very out of character for Buffy. And the story a little too complicated for a 6 year old.

The second chapter, I liked better. I thought Buffy's conversation with Thor was funny, but it was kind of stilted.

I look forward to more!
Comments from author:
Wow! another review. Thank you. yes the conversation is way big for a child of 6, but buffy was speaking more to us than the child if that made sense.
Review By [manic] • Date [28 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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