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Review of chapter "Buffy's Story" from RevDorothyL
Review:
A very satisfying thought about where Buffy might have ended up, and I particularly enjoyed the fact that her teaching style seemed to have been slightly influenced by Spike's, as in “Lesson the first, . . ."

Plus, Buffy/Teal'c isn't a pairing I encounter very often, but it can be a VERY engaging one, as you demonstrated here.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [25 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy's Story" from fanofkali
Review:
Good story
Review By [fanofkali] • Date [24 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy's Story" from Bobboky
Review:
i thought that Teal'c was married

good story so far
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [30 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy's Story" from link
Review:
So, the next chapter will be focusing on characters other than Buffy? I love Buffy as a teacher. She's doing well. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Yes, each chapter will focus on a different Scooby and where they are now. Although there may be mention of what the others are doing once their chapter has been posted.
Review By [link] • Date [30 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy's Story" from spk
Review:
I LOVE the idea of Buffy at Stargate. I also love the idea of her with Teal'c. I can just picture the looks as they walk down the street...such opposites. As for the others, I'm not too sure about everyone, but I love the idea of Willow and "West Wing", "Bones", or a show like "CSI" or "Law & Order." I can just see her in that kind of atmosphere and it would also take her back to her roots of intelligence. Can't wait to see what you do with this. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [29 Oct 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy's Story" from mithrilandtj
Review:
I like it.
It's got an interesting start.

A little too simplistic with the gloss-over of the Initiative and the NID
But I can see the President approaching her, especially if the Scoobs were trying to start over after the fall of SunnyD

Do more.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [29 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy's Story" from Clee
Review:
Great start...some suggestions for the rest. Faith and Captain Jack Harkness of Torchwood. Willow and Severus Snape. Giles and the sexy chick (shes either owner or head of the hotel) from Hotel Babylon. Xander and Lorilai Gilmore ( the mom).
Anyway, will be looking for whatever fandoms you choose.
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You have got to be kidding. This one of the lamest fics I've ever seen.

One. Buffy's history with the military is being totally ignored. There's no way she would ever consent to to BS like this:

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He nodded in acquiescence and continued, “Buffy, then. What I have to tell you is highly classified, so I’ll have to ask you to sign the non-disclosure agreement. It’s procedure, or I wouldn’t bother. I know you and your group are more than capable of understanding the need for discretion, but this is the military, albeit in no way like the Initiative, and procedures must be followed.” He slid a contract across to her.

Buffy did a quick glance over, and signed it. She trusted this president, as much as she could trust a politician, anyway. As she pushed the document back to him, she glanced at him. “So, what’s up with the job sitch?”
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But this kind of lame crap is typical of the people who crank out this kind of lameness.

They seem to be people who run out, sign some contract after halfway reading it, and then bitch and moan when they get sent to places like Iraq.

If this they actually knew anything about the Buffy series, It would be clear Buffy would *NEVER* sign this kind of contract again after being burned by it once, and she certainly wouldn't trust the president after the lame excuses he came up with for signing this contract.

He's approaching *HER* with this lame job offer not the other way around. The moment he slid the contract across the table, she would've walked out the door.

Who in their right mind wouldn't have?

Two. This pile of nonsense.

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It’s procedure, or I wouldn’t bother. I know you and your group are more than capable of understanding the need for discretion, but this is the military, albeit in no way like the Initiative, and procedures must be followed.
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Do you people have *ANY* idea of just what the Initiative was and just how nasty the whole thing turned out to be?

The last thing Buffy would fall for is a line of crap like this.
Review By [Clee] • Date [29 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy's Story" from azulkan
Review:
Great start...some suggestions for the rest. Faith and Captain Jack Harkness of Torchwood. Willow and Severus Snape. Giles and the sexy chick (shes either owner or head of the hotel) from Hotel Babylon. Xander and Lorilai Gilmore ( the mom).
Anyway, will be looking for whatever fandoms you choose.
Review By [azulkan] • Date [29 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy's Story" from martelcris
Review:
Suggestions ?

Willow ....consultant for Bones or the secret service (West wing or "in the line of fire" ).

Xander.. Rainbow Six may need a supernatural expert ? or will be the new John McClane partner !

Dawn...x-files, Dawn gig can be tricky, I think the Scoobies never let her go without a backup and, if B. is with SG1, Giles, Xander or Willow may follow her.

Faith in Eureka making sheriff Carter mad or hunting Sara Corvus on Bionic woman.
Review By [martelcris] • Date [29 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy's Story" from Dargos
Review:
Good story.

Problem with Xander-in-law-enforcement is that he lacks necessary skills.
Review By [Dargos] • Date [29 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy's Story" from CPTSkip
Review:
Interesting. I would have never thought of Buffy as a teacher, but you made it work. How about Dawn working with a Tomb Raider type? She would be great as the sidekick who always comes up with the bit of obscure knowledge needed to save the day. Lol! I look forward to more of your story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [29 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy's Story" from Bugeyedmonster
Review:
I would love to see various stories of the Scoobies after Sunnyhell, doing well. (*wince* didn't mean to rhyme there.)

Can I request crossovers with Criminal Minds, Numb3rs, or Life? (I used to watch Without A Trace, but...) Or maybe the ATF AU version of the TV series Magnificent Seven? Oooo... Due South?

I keep wanting to see Xander involved with law enforcement somehow if only as a civilian advisor. If it wasn't for that one eye, I'd think that he would do well, what with Hyena and Military guy in his head.

Dawn or Willow, with their brainy smarts I can see consulting for the FBI. Can you see Dawnie helping either with translating, or researching obscure rituals the help the feds track down serial killers? Or Willow's hacking skills helping Don's team (in Numb3rs) find some phishers. Or drug traffickers. Or human trackiffers?

Anyway... looking forward to more!

(^_^)/
BEM
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [29 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy's Story" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Pretty good.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [29 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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