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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Vickzie
Review:
Loving the story concept! Please update some more soon
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [26 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Past Donor)CallmemasterKent
Review:
Well done!

I'm really liking this... can't wait to see more.

Cheers
MJ
Review By [(Past Donor)CallmemasterKent] • Date [20 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from spk
Review:
Just discovered this. I like how you have Elizabeth getting flashes of memories from her previous life as Buffy. Can't wait to see how that comes into play later. I did want to point out one problem in chapter 1: After Izzie gives birth, you have a time jump of "10-1/2 years later", yet in Izzie's explanation of Elizabeth's birth, she says that it was 7 years ago. It seems to me that she would need to say it happened 10 years ago. :)
Comments from author:
thanks, im glad you liked it!

as for the confusion with the years, that's totally my fault. at one point i did have it at 6 1/2 - 7 years but decided that that didnt make sense so i changed it all to 10. Guess i missed a spot, thanks for letting me know!

:) shelby :)
Review By [spk] • Date [28 Mar 08] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from CPTSkip
Review:
Interesting read with some strange twists. I hope you continue as I have so many questions I'd love to see answered. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [27 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Twoboots
Review:
So far, so good! Give us more!
Review By [Twoboots] • Date [9 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kristal
Review:
Hum, interesting start! I hope you'll continue!
Review By [Kristal] • Date [8 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from littleoldme
Review:
I'm really excited that you responded to this challenge- definitely looking forward to seeing more!
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [8 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from HunterH
Review:
More soon please! me like :)
Review By [HunterH] • Date [7 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KatieKate
Review:
You've hit the characters personalities right on the head. Perfect. The only problem is that your timeline wouldn't work for college and medical school. If Izzie had Buffy when she was sixteen, and it's not quite seven years later, then Izzie is only 22 or 23. She'd still have to be in college or in her first year of med school. Assuming she graduated high school at the normal age of 18, spent four years as and undergrad at college, and then another four years in med school, then she'd be 26.
Review By [KatieKate] • Date [7 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Voldemort
Review:
I've never seen Grey’s Anatomy but I always like stories where Buffy has been reborn as a child with slayer powers.

I hope you will continue this story.

But you've made a mistake with the eye colors if Buffy is a baby she has brown eyes
"She’d held the baby for over an hour, just staring into the little brown eyes of her daughter."
And later on she has green eyes
“Yeah. Just look at the kid. She looks exactly like Izzie. The blonde hair, the green eyes. It’s freaky.”
Comments from author:
thanks for pointing it out!! i like to write but i'm the most horrible proofreader in the world . . . i'll fix it right away.
Review By [Voldemort] • Date [7 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
Fascinating.....
Comments from author:
thank you so much!! i wasn't sure if anyone was going to like this.

anymore, i'll try to have more soon.
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [7 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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