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Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from moldavia
Review:
Another triple (it would be out of the park if there was a sequel :P)
Review By [moldavia] • Date [21 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mendal
Review:
Ok the drug wasn't permanent, sooo take more?
Review By [mendal] • Date [24 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from SamuraiSky
Review:
Joe, I still don't know where you come up with such great stories. I'm really hoping you pick this one back up again. Really wanting to see how you were going to bring Hulk and The Bat into this.
Review By [SamuraiSky] • Date [20 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from CastorandPollux
Review:
Please come back to this story..............................................................PLEASE!!!!!
Review By [CastorandPollux] • Date [24 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from Meneldur
Review:
Another interesting story. I like the idea of Illyria/Rogue, and the relationship and their characters were nicely created and worked. I also liked Courtney and Elle - their insanity made them hilarious, and intriguing characters. i wish there had been a but more development of the later characters; i felt that as the story progressed, it lost some of its' focus, what with Peter, Skotti and Kate. The last chapter especially, with the love triangle and the two completely new and 'unknown' characters. Still it was very interesting, and I'm interested in the sequel you mentioned. Is it written, or at least planned out? I'd like to see more of the newer characters, and find out what the Scoobies plan to do, and whether Emma has plans for Rogue. Also to see where Illyria's plans will lead to. Until the next chapter/message/story, I remain your moderately faithful reviewer, Meneldur
Comments from author:
Everything was planned out but since this was a fic-a-thon fic, I found that semi-convenient ending spot and ended it early. There are actually chapter outlines for not only the rest of the fic but stuff in the middle of the story too, which would decompress some of the rush at the end. But again, sacrificed to meet the deadline.
Review By [Meneldur] • Date [15 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from deathgeonous
Review:
You know, I've never felt that this was a finished story, it needs a sequil. Please write one some day. Well, thanks for writing what you have of it, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [18 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from SilverWave
Review:
re read it still as good as I remembered.

Thanks :)
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [15 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from (Current Donor)Sithspit
Review:
Well hell, I didn't get update notices about the last three chapters...that happens a lot from TTH for some reason.

Anywho, love the updates JHH...Keep 'em coming.

More 'ship stuff would be grand....hope this story goes on for many more chapters.
Comments from author:
It will, some day.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sithspit] • Date [25 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from Dragonelf
Review:
I am already looking forward to read the next story in the arc. I wonder if the Men in Black will manage to sneak themselves into your story (one got to love those coffee drinking little aliens in the Men in Black movies) somehow?

::Feeds the plot bunny and gives the muse a huge jar of encouragement cookies::
Comments from author:
Once you go Worm, that's what you'll yearn!
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [25 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from GoldenRat
Review:
This is such an interesting fic. I do enjoy Illyria's strategy on taking over the world and her grooming Rogue as her right hand woman is an interesting use of her talents.
Comments from author:
Beats trying to slam herself into the modern world like a sledgehammer.
Review By [GoldenRat] • Date [25 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from Jess
Review:
*puts her head to the side like a curious puppy* Uh? *HUGS*
Comments from author:
O_o
Review By [Jess] • Date [24 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Hope Peter remembers to put the seat down! Good chapter really like how you did Peter's thoughts as he watched the two girl playing oneupmanship. Looking forward to the sequel!


Wispr
Comments from author:
Yeah. He might be in for a long, sad life if he doesn't. ^_^
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [24 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from stonegolem
Review:
As much as I love the story, did something get accidentally dropped? The stuff about Stark sorta came out of nowhere. Oh well, maybe it will be in the next arc. Like I said love it so far, and am looking forward to the further adventures of SHART.
Comments from author:
It's mentioned that they're looking for a home previously. Stark donates the space and some funding for SHART but both sides view the other as necessary: SHART needs the space and money, Tony needs something unspecified from them that has Cleopatra afraid of pissing them off.
Review By [stonegolem] • Date [24 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from Ramenth
Review:
Great fic. I look forward to reading more. You really are an awesome writer. :D
Comments from author:
Whoot. Thanks. :)
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [24 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from DigiEmissary
Review:
+20 points for use of the word "slanguage."

I'm glad Gwen is getting a bigger part. Gwen > MJ, and Bryce Dallas Howard >>> Kirsten Dunst.
Comments from author:
Oh hell yeah.
Review By [DigiEmissary] • Date [24 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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