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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KeriMcVean
Review:
Oh my god what a wonderfully dark story! Poor Dawn. This will haunt her forever.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [KeriMcVean] • Date [10 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)Ava
Review:
You killed Oz! Poor, nearly defenseless Oz! I think I kinda love you. ;)

Okay so the misdirection here was damn near amazing and at times it tripped me up and I simply adore it when a story leaves me with more questions than answers. There's something about those kind of endings that have me still guessing hours afterwards. Double thumbs up for ingenuity.

So Dawn's turmoil and then lack thereof was prefect and a more than interesting quirk and you mentioned Bobby. I 'heart' Bobby. It gave me a 'squee' moment like it does during the actual show.

And no need to apologize for the lateness. This was well worth the wait and if you ever see fit to dip into this writing style again please feel free and then instantly send me a link.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it. I recently read a book called Empire and there was a character in it that manipulated people by setting up situations where he got good people to do things they wouldn't normally do. He just found what situation would let them justify their actions and set that situation up. Of course there were no demons but I really liked the idea and thought I'd try something similar. :)
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [10 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
*flails

*flails again

You killed Oz. Oh my, such a lovely job. I actually shook my head and re-read it.
Comments from author:
A re-read? That's truly an honor (or it means I have atrocious spelling and grammar) to have a fic of mine worthy of a re-read.

Sorry about Oz but he was just in the wrong place at the wrong time. ;)
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [9 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)KaylaShay
Review:
Okay... What do I like about this fic? Lots.

First, we think Dawn is on the run from some big nasty. Turns out it's not a big nasty.

Then we think that Dawn killed two others in self defense. Turns out it may not have been self defense.

She enlists the aid of the Winchester boys and it may of been a bad thing to kill who/what they did.

Dawn was possessed by something. Or was she.

I love all the misdirection. There was so much that I don't know what was right and what was wrong and I absolutely love it!
Comments from author:
I'm really glad I participated in the fic-a-thon. I feel like this may be one my best works if not the best to date. I think it's the first time something I wrote has turned out this close to what I envisioned. Thanks for the review. :)
Review By [(Moderator)KaylaShay] • Date [9 Jan 08] • Not Rated
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