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Dawn's Stay With The Teen Titans

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Review of chapter "Hydroponics" from randomspaces
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Umm, NOS is introduced to the engine one of two ways. Directly into the fuel injectors, this is usually installed by profesionals, or by spraying a mist in the air intake, this can be done by most backyard mechanics. Cyborg would probably be able to set up the first method. Hydraulic lines are full of oil that is compressed and move through the tube to move something else ( eg. brakes). I don't really mean to nitpick, it was an enjoyable little diversion.

Dave
Review By [randomspaces] • Date [16 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hydroponics" from Ben
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Problem is, Dawn has always come across as rather bookish and smart, if impulsive, though never quite at Willow's level. This vignette doesn't work.
Review By [Ben] • Date [16 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hydroponics" from axolotl
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overload of happy for all the arrows, keys and bats universe updateness *throws happiness* this'll prolly be theonly review though since I am just saving the stories and going to my internetless home to read the rest. Still yay!
Review By [axolotl] • Date [16 Jan 08] • Not Rated
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