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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from SamuraiSky
Review:
Ahhh! Who is blue!? This has the potential to be a really good story Joe. But you're leaving me hanging.
Review By [SamuraiSky] • Date [29 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Great beginning.

Do **MORE**!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
I'm scarcely the greatest expert on Green Lantern, but if these rings are this intelligent and this capable of totally autonomous action, apparently even in total defiance of their wearer’s wishes – then why are they bothering with wearers at all? As presented here, their wearers are useless baggage along for the ride, with the rings being smart enough and capable enough to do anything they want. So I fail to see why new wearers are needed – just send these rings out to do their jobs on their own.
Review By [(Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [22 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Letomo
Review:
I know it's older, but this is an interesting story! I keep wondering if it chose Luna, or Tara. Which would be better? I almost wish it had chosen Xander for the difficulties that would raise with Cordelia. Hope it gets more inspiration!
Review By [Letomo] • Date [27 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Markelo
Review:
Who's the Blue one? I know it's a girl but who? I like the BtVS/Harry Potter/D.C. Xover.
Review By [Markelo] • Date [22 Nov 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from TheMightyFloyd
Review:
Liking this story. 'Ringmione' is funny. Looking forward to finding out who you chose for Blue. Always entertaining to read your stuff.
Review By [TheMightyFloyd] • Date [28 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from TheatricalBarrister
Review:
Well, I was only vaguely familiar with most of the prospects the rings screened, but I'd have to say that Luna is a pretty good examplar of Hope -- or is that more of a blind faith?

Nice start, although I do hope you update more frequently than once a year ;-)
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [17 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from sunamee
Review:
Interesting. I look forward to seeing how the meeting will go between the three.
Review By [sunamee] • Date [9 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from CPTSkip
Review:
Lol! Poor Harry. I'm just afraid there will be no getting away from Cordelia Chase now that she has superpowers. Love the fact Cordy got the "HAL" ring. But who is the Blue Lantern woman? Inquiring minds want to know. Looks like you've got another winner of a story here. Now go write more. Please?
Comments from author:
Next chapter.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [9 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Dragonelf
Review:
Looks interesting so far.

::Gives the plot bunny a cup of blueberry soup::

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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [9 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Fyrloche
Review:
Why do I have a sense of impending doom? I get the sneaking suspiscion of who Cordelia's back-up is going to be and the fireworks should be impressive.
Comments from author:
Well, the two share one Blue Lantern... so either way it's a witch; the only question is Sunnydale or Ottery St. Catchpole?
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [9 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from MarcusRowland
Review:
Enjoying this, minor Britspeak thing - we don't use "Yard" for garden. Also, and not your fault because everybody does it, I know Brits call the USA "the colonies" sometimes on American TV shows and in fanfic, but nobody ever really does!
Comments from author:
Yeah, I'm giving my Britpicker the story off for this one. I'll take that into account for future chapters, though, thanks.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [9 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Raider
Review:
*raises an eyebrow*

yeah, boy-who-lived, and girl-with-sharpest-tongue-this-side-of-LA and an unknown blue lantern.....am I the only one who gets the feeling that this cannot end well?

that said, I found this chapter to pretty amusing and entertaining.
Comments from author:
Yeah, there's a reason Harry wants to stay on the other side of the world. Its name is Cordelia.
Review By [Raider] • Date [9 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from darthridian
Review:
great story cant wait to hear who the blue one is.

keep up the great work.
Comments from author:
*tries to figure out who the Blue Lantern is*
Review By [darthridian] • Date [8 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)deitarionSSokolow
Review:
Interesting concept, but detailing the explorations of the rings seems a little too verbose for people who aren't die-hard Green Lantern fans. It might be better to make that more concise. (Given the principle of focus following relevance, perhaps the rejected candidates could be excluded altogether... using flashbacks or commentary to reveal their passing notice if they become relevant later)
Comments from author:
Actually, as of right now, I'm still not sure who the hell is getting what as far as the rings go. Apart from Tara OR Luna being the Blue Lantern (and the other is still eligible for Green if not picked), everyone there has a chance. The characters shown are a mix of original (Midori), five canon Green Lanterns (Hal came first, John was his backup, Guy became a Lantern after Hal had to leave Earth, Kyle was part of the resurrection of the Corps after it was all but destroyed, and Sora is a bit of a name game with Kyle's alien lover right now: fellow Lantern Soranik Natu), three from Buffy (Xander, Tara, and Cordelia of course), and then the two from HP (Harry himself and Luna). Their order of appearance is carefully plotted as the ring circumnavigates the globe from a spot in New England westward before returning to the ship after crossing the Atlantic. Seemed logical enough to me.

Oh, and Kal and his two mates were just for flavor because I didn't just want to throw in the text about "the Kryptonians" or such since we rarely see more than one in the early days of canon for the DC Universe.
Review By [(Recent Donor)deitarionSSokolow] • Date [7 Oct 09] • Not Rated
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