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Review of chapter "96" from JonnWolfe
Review:
This was absolutely brilliant. I say this a lot nowadays, but I could see things happening as I read them.

Joyce's death was more shocking this way, and it surprised me when it happened.

The absence of Spike was strange, because I'm so used to him being all protective of his Nibblet.

Anya is an annoying character, and how she betrayed Dawn really irked me. Yeah, she kills Ben... doesn't exonerate her though, in my opinion. Seeing Faith lose it and damn near kill her over it scared me. Brilliant writing there.

Of everything, you made F/B's relationship believable, of which I'm grateful. There wasn't anything gratuitous, and their interactions were completely believable. Making them both be the source for Dawn, while not new, had more of an impact here than in other stories.

Surprised you didn't use names from the Potentials for the Third Slayer. Personally, I would've gone with Kennedy first, then Vi.

When all's said and done, this was a wonderful piece of literature. Thanks for writing it. Any chance of a sequel? I realize the First is out since there's no resurrection spell going off - so I'm unsure what the plot would be. Still though, would be interesting. =)
Comments from author:
At the time I had rarely written Spike and wasn't sure how he'd add to the plot if Buffy and Faith were together. Thank you very much, this fic personally is one of my least favorites as it is one of my earliest. I'm glad you feel that Faith and Buffy's relationship was realistic, I'm not much of a Fuffy fan anymore :) Thank you very much
Review By [JonnWolfe] • Date [4 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "72" from maxthehobbit
Review:
Glory snapping Joyce's neck and killing her instantly was brilliant, but showing the emotions and the different ways people grieve was even better. Dawn and Faith crying and getting their grief out of the way fast while Buffy was in denial of sorts and not dealing with her grief. Giles stunned but able to function with concentration, and Anya actually for the first time feeling human emotions ... outstanding. Then Buffy, going out to kill Glory, live or die trying ... in Vietnam that happened all too often. The two or three chapters dealing with this are some of the best writing I've ever read.
Comments from author:
Thank you! That's very complimentary. I wasn't actually consciously intending to show how different people show grief differently, I was just trying to have them react as how I felt would be in character according to this story. Now, as I'm older and I view Faith differently than I did when I was a teenager, I would likely have her react differently than she does in this story, but considering how she was portrayed in this story I guess it's acceptable lol
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [9 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "96" from RebeccaAshling
Review:
That was...intense. And I've yet to finish "Of Little Faith" which has the same highly emotional content. The most shocking moment for me? Glory killing Joyce. They'd all had that water-fight and they were happy and then Glorificus turns up. You made her a scarier and more credible threat than she was portrayed on screen. This novel, and at about 300,000 words this is a novel, was well worth the time I spent reading it. Thank you.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I"m glad you enjoyed it. That particular aspect of it was meant to be very chilling and shocking so I'm glad it made an impact.
Review By [RebeccaAshling] • Date [24 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "96" from BrinLondofive
Review:
Excellent.
Review By [BrinLondofive] • Date [23 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "96" from Dragonelf
Review:
You have done an excellent job with this story.


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Oh, what a tangled web we weave
when first we practice to believe.
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [23 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "96" from batzulger
Review:
Epic and awesome.I've been tracking this one from the start and every chapter has been worth waiting for. And you're right, sometimes even the worst of us deserve a happy ending. Especially on Christmas.
Review By [batzulger] • Date [23 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "94" from Dragonelf
Review:
Have I mentioned that this story is on my list of CoA nominee candidates?

::Gives the plot bunny some Red Bean soup::

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Professor Charles Xavier: [as Wolverine brings his lit cigar into the Cerebro
chamber] Logan, my tolerance for your smoking in the mansion notwithstanding,
continue smoking that in here and you'll spend the rest of your days under
the belief that you're a six-year-old girl.
Logan/Wolverine: You'd do that?
Professor Charles Xavier: I'd have Jean braid your hair.
Logan/Wolverine: [puts out the cigar on the palm of his own hand]
- X2: X-Men United
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [21 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "93" from PiedraLumbre
Review:
Lovely! That was probably the most elegant way of resolving the situation and so romantic. Plus, you managed to get another cliffhanger out of this which is pretty impressive. I look forward to seeing where you take us next.
Review By [PiedraLumbre] • Date [19 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "93" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Looks cautiously at the cliffhanger::

I wonder who will become the new Slayer and if they will try to resurrect Buffy and Faith? I hope it isn't Kennedy who becomes the new Slayer.

::Gives the plot bunny some Manchow soup::

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Professor Charles Xavier: [as Wolverine brings his lit cigar into the Cerebro
chamber] Logan, my tolerance for your smoking in the mansion notwithstanding,
continue smoking that in here and you'll spend the rest of your days under
the belief that you're a six-year-old girl.
Logan/Wolverine: You'd do that?
Professor Charles Xavier: I'd have Jean braid your hair.
Logan/Wolverine: [puts out the cigar on the palm of his own hand]
- X2: X-Men United
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [19 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "92" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Gives the plot bunny some Manchow soup::

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Science is nothing but developed perception,
interpreted intent, common sense rounded
out and minutely articulated.
- George Santayana
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [18 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "91" from PiedraLumbre
Review:
Ooh, another cliffhanger . . . Also I really liked Dawn's musings about this Christmas being marked by an Apocalypse instead of Santa Claus.
Review By [PiedraLumbre] • Date [17 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "90" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Gives the plot bunny some Lung fung soup (Dragon phoenix soup)::

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There is only one success - to be able
to spend your life in your own way.
- Christopher Morley
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [14 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "88" from PiedraLumbre
Review:
I was wondering if there would be a tower in your version. Looking forward to seeing how you resolve this. (Sits waiting with bated breath)
Review By [PiedraLumbre] • Date [13 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "87" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Gives the plot bunny some Lung fung soup (Dragon phoenix soup)::

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The ocean is a mighty harmonist.
- William Wordsworth
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [9 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "86" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Gives the plot bunny some Lung fung soup (Dragon phoenix soup)::

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The ocean is a mighty harmonist.
- William Wordsworth
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [6 Dec 09] • Not Rated
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