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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Are airport restaurants in the habit of offering large helpings of animal blood on the menu? And can you get fries with that? Like your last story, far too many coincidences and circumstances that just happen to be very helpful to your heroine. She shows up here and - amazingly! - just happens to have everything needed for an extended adventure outside of civilization on her; even more amazingly, I'm sure they will also survive the crash intact and be found easily by her. You can just see the author telling her "Now this is going to be a long adventure, so make sure you stock up first on a lot of supplies!"
Comments from author:
ok i know i messed up on putting restaurants in giving her animal blood so i changed it to a butchers.

thank you for your review
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [17 May 08] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Tatsu
Review:
Very interesting original char, heheh quite the way to go, wonder how many will die this time around.
Comments from author:
thanks.

i'm glad you like it. i will update next thursday and then after that every thursday unless real life gets in the way.

i put five chapters up so it will be up to date with the same one i have on another site.
Review By [Tatsu] • Date [17 May 08] • Not Rated
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