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Review of chapter "Betrayal" from TroubledFred
Review:
I know your keeping this on hold till you finished 'The Chosen Two', but it's completed, so I hope you've been writing this cause I want to see it updated please.
Comments from author:
Unfortunately, I've taken a break from writing fanfiction. I'm not sure if I'll be coming back, but I hope that I do. Other things have become more important, and though I loved writing and getting feedback from you guys, I'm not sure if I will continue doing it. This is true of all of my stories. Here's hoping though. It's summer, so you never know what's going to happen.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Reviews are what I live for when writing fanfics. :)
Review By [TroubledFred] • Date [30 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Betrayal" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
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Great start so far! Very interesting. I can't wait for Chosen Two to be finished now because I love that story too and I can't wait for more of this one ;)
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [19 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Betrayal" from TroubledFred
Review:
I like the start so far and I'm so interested to see whats going to happen. Buffy/Voldy pairing...Yuck, but I will endure because even though I have only read one chapter I know this story will be good.
Review By [TroubledFred] • Date [21 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Betrayal" from spring
Review:
Wow! This is wonderful. I love the fact that both Draco and Narcissa had it out with Lucius. I am very very eager to read more of this wonderful fic so please update again soon
Review By [spring] • Date [7 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Betrayal" from Amai
Review:
I'm a little upset to see that it's listed as complete. It's an interesting idea, but not fully explored. And I agree that you need more time to developer her into a Buffy character rather than a character with the name Buffy. I found the ending a little... unfinished.

Just something to think about.
Comments from author:
Oops, I didn't realize that it was listed under completed! This is definitely not finished! >_<

Thanks for the review and pointing that out for me!
Review By [Amai] • Date [5 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Betrayal" from macalaarmstrong
Review:
I truly love your writing it is so vivid and it invokes a lot of emotions. I love this story plot and I don't think I have ever read anything like it before. What a bastard father that is selling his own daughter as a sex slave. Is she still going to go to Hogwarts when school starts. Keep up the great work and update soon. Have a lovely day.

Smile,
Macala A.
Comments from author:
Thanks so much! I know, Lucius is sort of a bastard, isn't he? She won't be going back to Hogwarts, but not to fret. More characters will be making their way into future chapters!
Review By [macalaarmstrong] • Date [4 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Betrayal" from TheEmpressOfJohoho
Review:
I like it, please update xD
Review By [TheEmpressOfJohoho] • Date [3 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Betrayal" from (Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker
Review:
wow. This is pretty good.
Review By [(Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Betrayal" from Bumblebee
Review:
I really love how you have started this fic please update soon! :)
I can see Buffy in the character in this fic with her strength and need to protect her family
Good job!
Review By [Bumblebee] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Betrayal" from ChloeWinchester
Review:
That was really good, I really enjoyed that. I do hope you continue this story.
Review By [ChloeWinchester] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Betrayal" from djhardim
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So, Narcissa goes to the current head of the Black family and gets a divorce.
Draco Malfoy becomes Draco Black.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Betrayal" from Wise
Review:
Not to jump on you here, but if the only thing she's got in common with Buffy is her name, in what sense is she Buffy? How is this not a Harry Potter fic starring an original character who happens to be named 'Buffy?'
Comments from author:
Well, it's only the first chapter, so I haven't been able to put in a lot of the unique qualities that we know and love. Also, I believe she gets called as the Slayer at 15, so keep that in mind...
Review By [Wise] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Betrayal" from Iceflame
Review:
This would be an seed for an interesting story.
Comments from author:
Thanks! :)
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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