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Review of chapter "Chapter Sixty Four" from Vilkath
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I have to say first, this story is pretty awesome. I love the plot, I Love how the characters are defined, I love just about everything. I love the three powers chosen to give to the wonderland subjects. They are all great powers obviously but also they are all powers given to people in a lab. Something that has proven to work more than once, on different people.

I am a little disappointed so far in how little the super powers really helped Xander though. The combined powers of captain America, wolverine and the Hulk and most of the time he's still a second stringer with little real impact on stuff. Sure he helps other people save the day, but he did that as just plain old Xander. I guess it's very in character with the orginal Xander how things played out, but it's a bit of a disappointment how little having powers did any good for Xander.

Sad that this story hasn't been updated in about 2 years, it doesn't seem like that the story even had that much more to go. Maybe a chapter or two of an epilogue and that's it, unless there be some new sequel idea of Xander learning more of his powers, or some flashback of what happened during the time of his lost memories.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [21 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Six" from raxadian
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Ah yes, and Fury didn't want to leave any of the heavy hitters guarding the stone, idiots.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [27 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Five" from raxadian
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Listen to the buff girl Logan!
Review By [raxadian] • Date [27 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Four" from raxadian
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And he is kind of a super soldier anyway.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [27 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Three" from raxadian
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Yeah Xander, you are a hero.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [27 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Two" from raxadian
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Funny the original Logan was shorter than Buffy...
Review By [raxadian] • Date [27 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty One" from raxadian
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Yeah, new playing the hero part.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [27 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from raxadian
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Yeah, total geek dream here.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [27 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from raxadian
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That guy face is gonna meet a hammer. Will you give Thor the Troll Hammer? Please?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [27 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from raxadian
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Colossus, meet Troll Hammer!
Review By [raxadian] • Date [27 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from raxadian
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Oh yeah, lucky number all right.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [27 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from raxadian
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Okay, so he is a mix of Wolverine and the Captain... damn...
Review By [raxadian] • Date [27 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from raxadian
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Okay, I hope they explain where Xander got his powers...
Review By [raxadian] • Date [27 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from raxadian
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Oh, someone whats to have his ass kicked...
Review By [raxadian] • Date [27 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from raxadian
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And the idiot just temped the great Murphy.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [27 Feb 14] • Not Rated
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