Review of chapter "Three" from Orchamus
Kill her!!If ever there was a heretic, it is her!!
Review By [Orchamus
] • Date [5 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three" from edware
Good story, but I have to ask are you waiting for FMA: Brotherhood to be complete or will you continue with the current FMA arc?
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading...I'll be honest I don't quite know if I want to follow the anime or the manga or do some bastard version of both. Its doesn't help that I prefer DANTE as a villain by far to FATHER
The manga has more interesting situations that I could re-work to include booth Willow and Xander If you have any ideas or suggestions please feel free to e-mail them. I am close to being done with my Black Lagoon x-over and once that is done I plan on diving right back into FMA
(I could use the lighter tone to decompress after the darkness of Black Lagoon)
Review By [edware
] • Date [24 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three" from JediKnight
Good work on the story so far, please do your best to add more soon.
Will there be any pairings in this story?
Review By [JediKnight
] • Date [29 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three" from Dragonhulk
A marked improvement from the first two chapters, so much that now I'm looking forward to seeing more.
Review By [Dragonhulk
] • Date [26 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three" from slightlyeccentric
This is a really interesting crossover and an awesome story. I think that you got all of the characters right, I can so see Xander complaining in his head about losing paper, scissors, rock to Al when he taught it to him. I can't wait to see what happens next and finding out what Ed meant when he said "fixing" what Xander had done to him.
Review By [slightlyeccentric
] • Date [14 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three" from spaceman
Odd twist to my Challenge Idea, but I like it! Hope you write a lot more soon!
Also, are you going threw the whole episode list or will you have time skips?
Comments from author:
I think I found a cool way to advance the story while skipping over several filler episodes I'll reveal more soon. *** incidentally I edited the dedication to include the fact I used your challenge as something of a basis
Review By [spaceman
] • Date [12 Jul 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from wraiths
Thank you for writing this it is very good. I think you have managed to do an excellent job characterizing Xander and the Elrich brothers. I can't wait to see where you take this story.
Review By [wraiths
] • Date [12 Jul 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]