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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from neverwill
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Sounds interesting. I'd love to see more of magically adept, Primal Shaman Xander. Is he looking to switch dimensions, or just fade from the Councils sight but stay in this same dimension?
Review By [neverwill] • Date [31 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LadyFoxFire
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So when is the next chapter coming out?
Review By [LadyFoxFire] • Date [9 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elleria
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More please?
Review By [Elleria] • Date [2 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spring
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Wonderful so far. You did however make one very noticeable tense error in the second to last paragraph, it's near the end of it so I'll let you find it yourself.^_^ Again I love what you have so far and I am looking forward to the next installment.
Review By [spring] • Date [6 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spacey
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i hope you consider continuing this. the thing i like best is that xander not quite duped everyone but managed to be a someone under their noses
Review By [spacey] • Date [20 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PsychoWing
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This is a really good start. I would love to read more so I hope you haven't shelved this.
Review By [PsychoWing] • Date [2 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spring
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Interesting.
Review By [spring] • Date [10 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from zafaran
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More, more, more, please. This is a marvelous beginning, and I can't wait to find out what happens to shaman!Xander in the rest of the story. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [1 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ladeia
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Interesting start. Waiting to see where you take it. :)
Review By [Ladeia] • Date [16 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from feynstrom
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No substance, just a lot of bashing and it gets rave reviews. I'm so proud of our reviewers here. Pure quality.

As for the story, try to write the actual story instead of just an outline for a setup trying to hurry the character along to where you want to have him. Needs serious work.
Comments from author:
I just love reviews...thanks ever so much. I try my hardest to pick ONE character and work with their POV and considering this was a random attack from my muse I thought it went rather well. Thanks for reading, come back soon.
Review By [feynstrom] • Date [6 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Caliadragon
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Interesting beginning, I look forward to seeing what will happen next and how Xander will change things.


Thanks
Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [6 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LadyFoxFire
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Is this going to be Jack's SG-1 with Hammond in command or the other one? Also is this goign to be a Xander slash? If so can you hook Jack up with Xander? Almost everyone hooks him up with Daniel or Cam
Review By [LadyFoxFire] • Date [5 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ZeeValentine
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whoooo.!!!!!!! go xander.....the story is new and fun......more please
Review By [ZeeValentine] • Date [5 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mayoi
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is there coming more? please?
Review By [mayoi] • Date [5 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kyzhart
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Well this is certainly an interesting premise. Will he still be Xander or will you be giving him a new cannon Stargate identity. I hope he stays Xander but in a different dimension. Looking forward to reading more.
Review By [kyzhart] • Date [5 Aug 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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