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Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Last Mistake" from AbigaelRose
Review:
Not sure if I reviewed this one yet so here goes...love the brilliant story
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [AbigaelRose] • Date [18 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Last Mistake" from Shaybo
Review:
I'm SO looking forward to this! Buffy messin' with them, Bobby being awesome, Dean :D Lol. I like the 'Uncle Bobby' bit. Very Buffy-esk :) As well as Bobby's reactions. Hmm :) Good lookin' chapter! (I almost said 'chap', and then I thought: British! ... I'm tired.) I wish you luck writing anything else you... are writing. (that sounded kinda awkward, sorry) See ya! :)
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Review By [Shaybo] • Date [12 Jun 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Last Mistake" from raintree
Review:
I really enjoyed reading these 2 chapters, your style of writing is really easy to read and i like the banter between the characters so much so that i wished i knew more about the dc world as I've had a nose around and seen that's the area you have written a lot in. Looking forward to more chapters
ttfn
~Rain
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [raintree] • Date [11 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Last Mistake" from bradsan
Review:
A very good update, worth waiting for.

I love the Uncle Bobby part and Dean thinking he will get his ass kicked if he flirts with Buffy. Bobby had a hard time with the learning thing if she acted the same way as she did with Giles. More mature way but knowing Buffy Bobby could strangle her several times.

I really like Buffy this way. She looks like the Buffy from season one and two with a mix from the other seasons. With that I mean She is doing her thing and don't let the Scoobies talk her back from it. She is strong again and darn I love that. In the mean while Willow will still looking into stuff even if Faith is asking/demanding her to do it.

Faith and Buffy are the chosen ones and if they have a lead or their guts tells them to follow something. The others has to learn to trust it instead of trying to talk them out of it. They always forget just like the old Council that they have help the Slayers in every way they can even when they have some doubts or think it's useless. The Slayer is the one who has the ability to recognize some thread and they don't. Buffy almost never had it wrong.

So again a really good update can't wait what will be next.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad it was worth the wait! :) I have the next chapter roughly halfway done, but it still going to take awhile yet.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [6 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Last Mistake" from soulNchantress
Review:
Yay! I found another of your fics to drool over! I'm really liking your Buffy. Same ol' 'let's bash on it', with more common sense than most people credit her for! I'm really getting into this story. The 'gang' has a whole group of bodyguards now, they need to cut Buffy some slack.

I usually don't have time to review, so this isn't as detailed or long winded as would have liked. Just wanted to say 'Yay' and let you know that you have a Tracker. LoL
Comments from author:
Thank you! :) I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far!
Review By [soulNchantress] • Date [6 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Last Mistake" from AbigaelRose
Review:
Oh yeah! You have just set up the beginnings of a beautiful fic.
Abby-rose
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [AbigaelRose] • Date [6 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue: Mistake Number Two" from bradsan
Review:
alright I'm getting it. You are not gone update this story but could you please write one chapter where Buffy kicks the yellow demons ass and shows him why he should never layed his hands on Dawn.

Pretty, pretty please.

edit: I'm glad everything goes better and you got your muse back. A fire is very scary I'm glad nobody was hurt. Again I'm glad things go better.
Comments from author:
I wouldn’t say that I’m not going to update it… And I know I haven’t updated since ’08, but believe it not I do have part of chapter two written.

Short story with what happen is around the time I was writing When the Night Merges a lot negative things were going on in my life which pretty much killed the muse. I also lost all my notes because of a house fire that happened a few years later. Luckily no one was hurt in the fire, but anyways…I didn’t start writing again until I started the story Concealed Shadows in ‘11. However it wasn’t until I started writing Hidden Joke that my passion for writing truly came back. Recently some my thoughts and scene ideas have been coming back so it is possible for new chapters to come.

But it will be awhile yet. I want to finish Winter’s Child first. Plus I want to wait for when my sister and I have our Supernatural marathon in a few months. If that doesn’t kick my muse back into gear, then nothing will.

If my muse truly doesn’t want to come back for this story then I see what I can do about a oneshot for Buffy VS Yellow Eyes.

Sincerely,
Lady Healer
Review By [bradsan] • Date [6 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue: Mistake Number Two" from FireWolfe
Review:
Great start
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [5 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue: Mistake Number Two" from bradsan
Review:
you get so many good reviews. why is it that this story isn't updated then. please try to update.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [24 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue: Mistake Number Two" from Seraph
Review:
This is a very good beginning. And I really have only one question: Why has it not been updated?! This is too good to languish.
Review By [Seraph] • Date [4 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue: Mistake Number Two" from Mazzy
Review:
wow what a great start, really cant wait for more, please update soon
Comments from author:
Thanks. I’ll try to update as quickly as possible, but I’m picky. I won’t release it until I feel that got it how I want it.
Review By [Mazzy] • Date [3 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue: Mistake Number Two" from Tanydwr
Review:
Oh wow! My art inspired this? Brilliant.

I love Dawn's internal dialogue in this - it works very well as an analysis of the last few episodes of Buffy and the character relationships therein. And the way of doing this... Wonderful. Poor Dawn was simply in the wrong place at the wrong time... Or was she?

Is this based on a new 'generation'? Kids all born in 2006 (like the baby in 'Salvation')? Or is the YED breaking pattern?

I can't wait to read more.

Lol, Tanydwr

P.S. Expect a banner or similar to appear in my artwork story at some point soon with the title in it!
Comments from author:
Thank you!

Your art certainly did inspire me. For months I wanted to write a Buffy/Supernatural story, but all my ideas at the time seem to fall flat when I started to write them. Then one day I was looking through your fanart, which are completely awesome, and the scenes for this story just hit me. As it is I have about half a notebook full of cliff notes version of the story!

Is YED breaking pattern? Not exactly...

Banner or similar? That would be great! I’ll definitely go check it out when it comes out!
Review By [Tanydwr] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue: Mistake Number Two" from DarkPhoenix
Review:
This is good, update again soon.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [DarkPhoenix] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue: Mistake Number Two" from Bunney
Review:
That was great!!! Was a beginning chapter i hopr the rest are this interesting!!!

Later and Love
Bunney
Comments from author:
Thanks! Things should get a whole lot more interesting soon enough.
Review By [Bunney] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue: Mistake Number Two" from sapph
Review:
Wow! I love it. I don't know why, but when I read that Buffy saw Dawn on the ceiling, I flashed to a future chapter where Buffy is talking to the parents of the baby, she's wanting to keep the baby with her, to make sure that the demon doesn't come after it, and when the parents are all like "You're crazy!! There are NO such things as demons!!" she looks them in the eye and speaks in that quiet calm scary-as-hell voice that she has "My sister DIED to save your son. I'm not going to leave him to die with ignorant people and have let Dawn died for nothing. Now I am taking your son, and you are not going to stop me." I know that it's out of character for Buff to be that forceful, but that was where my mind flashed to.
I love what you have so far, and I hope that the following chapters will be just as good. I can't wait till the next chapter, so until then, may your muse visit soon and often.
Comments from author:
I’m glad you’re enjoying the story so far. It’s an interesting scenario. If you ignore the grief factor, because grief affects everyone differently, then yeah Buffy would be a little out of character. On the other hand I wouldn’t be surprised if Buffy set something up to protect little David from a distance…
Review By [sapph] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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