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Review of chapter "Chapter Fourty-One" from Glumski
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I just finished re-reading this and I have to say, it really is a wonderful story. The characters were very well done, the style of writing was nice and even though Dawn-but-not-quite-Dawn was weird at first she quickly became on of my favourite characters of the story.
My only point of criticism is that it might have been a bit too mellow at some points; the part up to that glorious off-world scene felt a little like an enormous introduction. The ending was a bit sudden but I guess I'd have done the same (if I could write that well). That off-world scene itself, well, I absolutely loved it.
And the amount of cake involved (or mentioned) made me quite hungry all the time. That was really mean...
Review By [Glumski] • Date [9 Apr 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourty-One" from raxadian
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This was a great story. Thank you.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourty" from raxadian
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Oh, I am loving the explanation she will do of this.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Nine" from raxadian
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Oh, this is gonna be fun!
Review By [raxadian] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Eight" from raxadian
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Again, I love this version of Dawnie, her having grow up since she was a baby with the gang makes her easier to love than just a teen that appeared out of nowhere.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Seven" from raxadian
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This Dawn has a better life than the Teen one so far, no Teen issues, no my sister is the Slayer stuff, Jack and Buffy as parents, The Scoobies being her uncles, and new uncles being the SG-1.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Six" from raxadian
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Looks like Jaffa might be a better challenge for Buffy.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Five" from raxadian
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I don't like Jack and Buffy together, but somewhat, you are making it work.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Four" from raxadian
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Yeah, I guess it would be too much.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Three" from raxadian
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Yeah, the Slayer is basically a predator, that reminds me, how would Buffy fit in the Andromeda (TV series) universe? Uh, where did that come from?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Two" from raxadian
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Well, they knew she had gone hunting.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One" from raxadian
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Ah yes, let's go hunting!
Review By [raxadian] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty" from raxadian
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Wait, Dawn is basically a Buffy clone, without being a Slayer, so Jack would be really Buffy dad only Thor only detected Dawn because unlike Buffy, she is not that much protected? And... okay, this got confusing...
Review By [raxadian] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Nine" from raxadian
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So is Buffy Jack's daughter or he is Dawnie father?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Eight" from raxadian
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Another room? Reality change?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
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