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Review of chapter "Chapter 18" from yuiop
Review:
Nice
Review By [yuiop] • Date [13 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 18" from Angelfirenze
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This is such a great story, the family dynamics are absolutely engrossing. The thing that took me so long to get back to it about is that it's post-Kate-Ari and I always felt that Ari was an amazing character (actually sympathetic, particularly in his second appearance) and that in making him evil and killing him, we...well, I just loved his complexity, so I've had a hard time actually watching his final episode.

Anyway.

My love of Ari aside, this was well worth the wait and extremely well-done. I loved every bit of it, especially the glimpse into Eli David's state of mind. His stress about his children is nothing to play with. Huh.
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [8 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 18" from Harry
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Gwendolyn, you are DEAD! Between Gibbs, the Council AND the Mossad, you are not going ANYWHERE for the rest of your natural life except to JAIL! And, this kidnapping attempt may have done something that was needed: Force Buffy to confront her past and MOURN! But we need to see what happens next. How about a update? Its been almost a year and a half since you last posted.
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from Harry
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Gwendolyn Post, I have a piece of advice for you: RUN! Run and don't look back! Because if Ziva and Eli get a hold of you, they will make you scream from what they will do to you. If QT and his people find you, they will send you someplace that you don't want to go. And if Angel finds out, well, I don't WANT to go there!
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from Harry
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Well, well, well, well. For once BUFFY gets to take care of big sister, not the other way around! And Ziva is not going to argue very much. Something like this is something that should be looked at.
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from Harry
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I can see that Jethro has been a good aid to Lizzy. He has helped her deal with many a nightmare and has become well known around NCIS as well. And the idea of learning ASL is a good idea. Never know when that will come in handy.
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Harry
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Don't ask me why, but I don't think that Elizabeth has totally lost being the Slayer! These little things just add up that way to me. And Elizabeth is going to LOVE having Jethro around. He is good for helping to calm her down with these nightmares or possible Slayer dreams that she is having.
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Harry
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I think that Elizabeth has made a good friend in Abby. That Goth knows how to make people feel welcome in her lab, and how to explain things to them. As far as the dreams, I think that Ziva is right in that they will fade in time. And the offer to stay with Elizabeth this night will help somewhat.
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Harry
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Elizabeth, its going to take a while for those nightmares to go away. Its something that you and Ziva are going to have to deal with. But now, its time to get everything cleaned up and ready to go. New day at NCIS and first day of the intern program for you Elizabeth!
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Harry
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Only Tony, ONLY TONY could get away with calling Elizabeth, Mini Ziva and get away with it! And the head slap: Typical Gibbs. I think that Elizabeth is going to fit in very nicely with NCIS.
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Harry
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Those pictures help Elizabeth out a great deal in dealing with her past in Israel and what she missed when she came to the states. Now, a little work at the beauty shop and she and Ziva WILL look like sisters, at least in hair coloring.
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Harry
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Jenny's idea makes sense! This way Elizabeth can continue her education, and at the same time, learn things from Ziva and the others at NCIS on how they handle things. Works out well for everyone.
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Harry
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Well, these Arabs found out the hard way that you do NOT mess with the children of Eli David. Elizabeth played the dumb blonde role to perfection until Ziva and Tony showed up, and then was able to help with the capture. She may be heading to DC, but I LOVE the idea of Faith coming to Sunnydale! *FAITH IS IN THE HOUSE!!!!!!* Now, its time to get to DC, and get set up with Ziva until things are straightened up on if she is going to stay in the US or head for Israel.
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Harry
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Why do I suspect that either the Council or Mossad drugged Elizabeth? And if so, WHY? And whoever did it, is going to PAY! If it was the council, then they will find out just what happens when you get the Mossad mad at you! Eli David is many things, but cross this man, and you will find yourself in a war that will make you wish you were taking on vampires and demons! If it was Mossad, then it was under his orders to get Elizabeth back to Israel. Time for some answers and soon!
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Harry
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Well, enough of Buffy/Elizabeth's background is out to calm down Giles, Jenny, Willow and Xander. And Ziva is fortunate that she did NOT try to tangle with Angel. She might have gotten hurt or worse!
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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