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Review of chapter "Onward Ever Onward" from bradsan
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got this one on tracking don't wait to long.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [5 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Onward Ever Onward" from BSilverbow
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Ok, I just looked at your stats and found out that you posted this in '08 and only updated it recently. This leads me to the unfortunate conclusion that I'm going to have to wait for three more years for another update...please don't make it so!
Review By [BSilverbow] • Date [29 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End" from BSilverbow
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This is a very interesting premise. I'm absolutely astounded that there are so many Stargate/Buffy crossovers, but I'm equally as glad. Keep it up!
Review By [BSilverbow] • Date [29 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Onward Ever Onward" from nightshadowlife
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Can't wait to see the next chapter!!!!!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [10 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Onward Ever Onward" from angelbaby
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I like this story so far. I would love if you continued this story.

If you wanted more info on transportation: For the trip from LA to Colorado Springs, I looked up Amtrak and it would take a 21 hour 35 minute train from La to Raton, New Mexico and then a 3 hour bus trip from NM to Colorado Springs. From experience, Amtrak trains are pretty nice. A Greyhound bus would take 1 day, 2 hours, 25 minutes to get from LA to Colorado Springs.

The only issue I had with the first chapter is that we would call it bills, or cash and not a note.

Again, awesome story so far.
Review By [angelbaby] • Date [21 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Onward Ever Onward" from Morgomir
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Interesting start. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [20 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Onward Ever Onward" from dreameralways
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I have no clue where you got 10 days from. It's more like a 16 hour drive plus any layover times in bus stations. I got that you said that you googled it, but I have no idea why it spit out 10 days. Curious about what you will do with the story.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [20 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Onward Ever Onward" from Blackett
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more please.
Review By [Blackett] • Date [19 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Onward Ever Onward" from VillageOrchid
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Glad to see more of this. Yeah, you can probably use Grayhound or another bus carrier link to determine the length of the bus trip from LA to Colorado. I'm sure there are stops along the way.

It's lovely that you have Buffy thinking and feeling through some of her issues... ready for a fresh start, but not burning her bridges.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [19 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Onward Ever Onward" from spk
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Very interesting start. Can't wait to see what you do with this. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [19 Mar 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Onward Ever Onward" from darkplayer
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Interesting story. It has potential. Please update soon.
Review By [darkplayer] • Date [19 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Onward Ever Onward" from Gideon
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Good work. Keep it up
Review By [Gideon] • Date [19 Mar 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Onward Ever Onward" from BarbarossaRotbart
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Interesting start. Please do not make this a Sam/Jack or Sam/Daniel story.
Review By [BarbarossaRotbart] • Date [19 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Onward Ever Onward" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
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great chapter...though I think xander got off to easily...oh well. I can't wait to read more. =D
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [19 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Onward Ever Onward" from (Recent Donor)thetwitmachine
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it's just under 1800 km from los angeles, california, to colorado springs, colarado. That's a little more (in distance) Than driving from sydney to melbourne and back again, but because roads are good in the states it only takes about 18 hours of actual driving. with buses it could take more because they stop along the way to pick up/drop off people, etc.
Review By [(Recent Donor)thetwitmachine] • Date [19 Mar 11] • Not Rated
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