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Review of chapter "XIII & Epilogue" from bluemac
Review:
Oh boy, this was the crossover I didn't realize I needed. So very entertaining!
Comments from author:
Thanks - it was fun to write.
Review By [bluemac] • Date [16 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XIII & Epilogue" from Shadowman
Review:
I haven't seen the newer movies but I loved the older St. Trinian movies and it was fun seeing them used in this way.
I think you caught the spirit of the school perfectly.
Comments from author:
When I wrote this I hadn't seen the new ones - think I got round to it just after posting the last chapter. I think maybe it works better that way.
Review By [Shadowman] • Date [31 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XIII & Epilogue" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
Utterly, utterly delightful. Thank you!
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it - had a lot of fun with that one.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [17 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XIII & Epilogue" from Gideon
Review:
Oh, I like this one! Age, experience and wisdom (well sneakyness anyway) triumph over youthful high spirits. I knew there was always a good reason for keeping a rocket launcher or two around :) Not to mention a small army of violent youngsters.
It was great to see Gwendolyne Post again. It was a surprise to see her in the library and I wasn't on board with Buffy's suspicion of her for most of the story. I should have known better :( A great ending to a great villain.
Comments from author:
Sorry to be so long responding, for some reason I didn't get several review notifications last month. I knew from the start that I was going to be ending it that way, which is why there is the rocket launcher, Gwendolyn and a gratuitous Strangelove reference near the start, and why Post says "Miss Fritton, I can walk!" at the end. For some reason it took me years to get from A to B and I'm still not sure why - glad you feel it was worth the wait.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [24 Nov 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "II" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
I really meant the 55 words thing as a joke.

I really did like the story!



Review of chapter "II" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
So far so good.

You couldn't come up with another 55 words to make it an even 35,000?



Comments from author:
The word count doesn't include headers etc. anyway so it's pretty meaningless.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [6 Nov 10] • Rating [8 out of 10] • Edit Review
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [7 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter V" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
Marcus, do you you have a link to a British English dictionary? Because to me worst means as bad as it possibly be. I'd be using worse, meaning bad but still a possibility of it getting badder.




"Well, I guess the food could be [worst]," Buffy said to Willow as they talked in Willow's room that evening.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [7 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "VII" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
I'm fairly sure this is a typo and not British usage of the word however it's systemic through out this story.



"We [bought] this," said Buffy, handing him a gift-wrapped bottle of gin.


brought
Comments from author:
No, it's just me - for some reason I seem to have a blind spot on a few words, this is one of them, worst is another. Thanks for bringing both to my attention.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [7 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "II" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
So far so good.

You couldn't come up with another 55 words to make it an even 35,000?
Comments from author:
The word count doesn't include headers etc. anyway so it's pretty meaningless.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [6 Nov 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XIII & Epilogue" from (Past Donor)Mhalachai
Review:
This is totally brilliant. I love your use of old enemies - it fits really well. The whole story is just fun, from start to finish. Thanks for writing it!
Comments from author:
Thanks - it took me forever to write it for some reason, glad you think it was worthwhile.
Review By [(Past Donor)Mhalachai] • Date [19 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XIII & Epilogue" from ShyBob
Review:
Bloody brilliant. Haven't seen the films or read the book, but the crossover stands on its own merits. Great to see an old enemy beaten down by our heroines and bit players (without having to resort to Ethan Rayne).
Comments from author:
Thanks - it took me way too long to write it, but I think it's moderately faithful to the older books and films. Glad you liked it.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [13 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XIII & Epilogue" from twlight
Review:
Wonderful story. It would be nice to learn how Giles takes the news of the bill for what the school is charging the council.
Comments from author:
"Oh dear lord..."
Review By [twlight] • Date [14 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XIII & Epilogue" from Stark
Review:
Never read/seen St Trinians, and never been tempted - but I've read stuff of yours before and loved it (I don't think I could review at the time cos I wasn't registered) so I gave it a go. Completely awesome. Who could fit into that scenario and hold their own better than Buffy and Willow?

I can imagine Ms Fritton as the kind of Watcher who initially approached Faith - just unflappably sailing through chaos!

Thanks for the entertainment.

stark
Comments from author:
Glad you liked the story - I hadn't seen the 2007 St. Trinian's film when I wrote most of, but it's a pretty good portrayal of the school as I imagine it, much better than the one made in 1980. There was a new film in December that looks like it'll be a lot of fun too.
Review By [Stark] • Date [4 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XIII & Epilogue" from Javian
Review:
Hah, excellent story.
Comments from author:
Thanks - I think it worked OK, but for some reason I found it very hard to finish, think it shows a bit.
Review By [Javian] • Date [20 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XIII & Epilogue" from (Current Donor)Speakertocustomers
Review:
Wonderful story. Great to see it completed, but also bad because it means there won't be any more to look forward to.
Comments from author:
I thought it was high time I got it done - next I really ought to look at the unfinished Modesty Blaise crossover...
Review By [(Current Donor)Speakertocustomers] • Date [5 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XIII & Epilogue" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Six years in the writing...that must be some sort of record; and yes I do think it was worth waiting for. Mind-you, I'm sure that wasn't how you meant to end it when you began!

Thanks for completing.

DaveT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [24 Apr 09] • Not Rated
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