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Wacky Rooftop Hijinks

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)cameocat
Review:
Okay.

“See? Yours is just bigger than mine.”

He paused. “Huh. Not a thing I’m used to saying.”

My cats thank you for the spit-take. They enjoyed the beer.

More, please. Oh, considering what I just quoted, maybe not the best choice of words. Let me rephrase: Please write another chapter.
Review By [(Current Donor)cameocat] • Date [11 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Scrappychic
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I never pictured a Torchwood and Batman cross before now, but I see a few in my head right now. I'd love to see more in this verse at some point. Maybe a continuation of the story or maybe more oneshots of the different times Jack and Batman have meet up.
Review By [Scrappychic] • Date [30 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MoragMacPherson
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OOooh you're bad. Love the underwear note.
Review By [MoragMacPherson] • Date [10 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bigreader
Review:
Funny. Gives me an idea. Make Xander like jack and send him to the DC universe.
Review By [bigreader] • Date [10 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bluejello
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My mind just ran away with the mental picture of Jack and Bruce in barfights... Damnit! I blame you for this! ;)
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [9 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cbq
Review:
That was a very amusing read. Thank you :-)
Review By [cbq] • Date [9 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from utilitariancaramel
Review:
Hee! I knocked a couple of points off for dialog - "dramaticalness" and such just seems like Buffyspeak. Still, wonderful story! I can kind of buy everyone acting like that.
Review By [utilitariancaramel] • Date [8 Feb 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bugeyedmonster
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lol! Enjoyed that. Only Jack could so easily take the Bat's attitude. I think a good Jack smoochie would be good for His Broodiness (or would that be His Grumpiness) but I can't see Bruce letting himself get that... uhm... friendly.

I can see Robin going along with a good smooch. (And which Robin was this?)

Loved Jack mildly flirting with Gordon. Someone needs to tell Gordon, "Take no notice, Jim, he does that with everyone." loved the "you're-very-pretty-when-you-play-dumb".

"Explaining the kneeling man holding up designer underpants directly in front of him would take some doing." And it would have taken even more if Jack had decided to smooch Gordon. lol!

I can see why Jack jumped off the building. I just know the Bat would try to restrain Jack, and that was probably the 'fastest' way to get away from Bruce. OTOH, can't you just hear the comments Jack would make if Bats tied or handcuffed him to something. "Oooo, kinky." I can just hear Bats grinding his teeth or growling.

I'm sure there is a perfectly good innocent story behind Talia, Tibet and the pudding pops. It's just the way Jack says everything that makes it sound slightly sordid and sexual. (Well, if Talia was there, then Ra's might have been too, and I'm sure that wasn't very innocent, but Jack just makes everything sound like orgy time.)

Loved Jack's comment about "yours is just bigger than mine." followed by the other comment. lol! See Brucie should be happy, Jack's just admitted his is smaller. lol! Bats is wound up way too tight.

Hey, at least Bats got Jack to react on the underwear sniffing. lol!

Sigh... almost makes me wish this was more than one part. I'd love to see more of Jack irritating the Bat. I'm sure Gordon and Robin would be amused by it all.

(^_^)/
BEM

PS.. Can we hear the story about Jack, Talia and Bats in Tibet with the pudding pops?
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [8 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SailAweigh
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OMG, I'm laughing so hard I have tears in my eyes. Awesome!
Review By [SailAweigh] • Date [8 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from knightshift
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This is so wrong on so many levels. Oh, and hilarious.
Review By [knightshift] • Date [8 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MarbleGlove
Review:
Awesome!
Review By [MarbleGlove] • Date [8 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MarcusRowland
Review:
Oh yes, Jack would definitely upset Batman. Nice one.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [8 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
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ROTFLMAO!!! OMGoddess, you got everyone done so perfectly... beautiful and hilarious writing.

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [8 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from adoxerella
Review:
*giggle* I like you insane. You make me giggle first thing in the morning, before the coffee has kicked in. This is no small task.

Lovely little bit of tongue in cheek humor. Very cute. My only problem now is that I want to know the story about Talia, Batman, Jack and the pudding pops.

Thanks for sharing this.
Review By [adoxerella] • Date [8 Feb 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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