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Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from SilverWave
Review:
What a grand story :)

Thanks.
Comments from author:
You're Welcome!

Be sure to read the other stores in the series:
"The Way of Light" and "the Last Sandworm"
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [27 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
Wonderful read.
Comments from author:
Thank You! : )
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [11 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from Rogues
Review:
Interesting plot I do hope that you choose to continue this as a series.
Review By [Rogues] • Date [9 Apr 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from Mcspender
Review:
Nice set of chapters =)!.

So, let's see, that frakking blimp was K.Oed by Faith, and boy, that felt right!!.
He really deserved it :P.
Nice trick with Motorria riding the wave, so to speak; pretty smart trick by the way.
Any plans for the next chapters? 'Cause I don't think the slayers are gonna go quietly into the night.

See ya!!
Comments from author:
Thanks to everyone for the positive reviews. You made my day. : )
I'm thinking about turning this into a series. I'll see.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [8 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Orion
Review:
Very interesting. My only experience with dune is the older movie, and the two newer SciFi channel mini series, but I like this. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Orion] • Date [24 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from CPTSkip
Review:
Frak! This is one spooky story. And I'm still not sure the Slayers are going to be able to win this war. Way to go.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [24 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 4" from Alianna
Review:
woh! that was a cool chapter!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Alianna] • Date [18 Feb 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 4" from CPTSkip
Review:
Very cool story. I look forward to the Slayer-Old Ones War. I just wonder what the triumphant Slayers will do with the God Emperor when they return after they win. If they win, of course.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your kind review. I've already got the answer to that question but I'll save it for the end of the story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [18 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Alianna
Review:
I'm really starting to enjoy this fanfic! I love how you captured the exact style of Frank Herbert. I hope to read more when Leot is able to unleash the Slayers! Hope you'll continue this story!
Comments from author:
Thank you. : )
Review By [Alianna] • Date [16 Feb 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from sropike
Review:
I really, really like your story thus far. A little more detail, and a little less jumping between the scenes would be appreciated. As t is it"s stil very good, but it just barely wets my appetite and thus it's torturing me...

A little nitpicking: It's Liet and Liet-Kynes, not Leit. And the training technique is prana-bindu not para-bindu.
Comments from author:
Thanks for your feedback.
I'll make the corrections ASAP.
Review By [sropike] • Date [15 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from CPTSkip
Review:
Your story is both wonderful and wonderfully strange. And now it has a bit of a Lovecraftian feel also. I guess Leto thinks it is time to turn loose the Slayers. I wonder if the God-Emperor really remembers about the bad history of Slayers versus Very Large Snakes. Lol! I look forward to more of your engaging and disturbing tale.
Comments from author:
I want to thank everyone for the positive feedback. For info in "The Deeper Well" pop in your Angel Season 5 DVD and review "A hole in the world" and "Shells". Next chapter soon. Oh yeah, I'll try not to blow up any large snake shaped characters. : )
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [15 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from sropike
Review:
NICE!

Looking forward to more of it!

sropike
Review By [sropike] • Date [12 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from CPTSkip
Review:
Excellent job of capturing the spirit of Frank Herbert's Dune books. I have no idea of where your story is going, but it looks like an interesting journey. I wonder if the Bene Gesseret are the descendants of Slayers?
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [11 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Marcel
Review:
Hmm... It's difficult to understand a rocket launcher surviving all this time. (Ok, I realize it's not "the" rocket launcher, but even so.) The scythe on the other hand would have been a much more important item.

Oh well... still looking forward to what comes next :)
Comments from author:
Thank you for your kind words. I wanted somthing from Buffy's past that could only be connected to her. I added a comment about it being in a bubble of "no-time" which helped perserve it.
Review By [Marcel] • Date [11 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from DeepRed
Review:
Unexpected. I don't think even the idea of a Buffy/Dune crossover has ever occurred to me but kudos for pulling it off.
Review By [DeepRed] • Date [11 Feb 09] • Not Rated
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