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Review of chapter "Problems" from (Current Donor)Tempi
Review:
I still a bit confused about the plot, but it's starting to make sense a bit like a puzzle one piece at the time. I look forward to reading more.
Review By [(Current Donor)Tempi] • Date [10 Dec 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What in the hell?" from Hecatonchires
Review:
Shego?
Comments from author:
...Nope. Good guess though.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [7 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Holy @#*!" from draconis
Review:
Like the way you're developing and converging the arcs. Definitely looking forward to more.

A bit more backstory on Roan might be in order for readers, but that's probably because while I'm a fan of Kill Bill and Buffy, I'm totally unfamiliar with Kim Possible. e.g. What were some of Roan's notable accomplishments pre-Wolfram & Hart? WHY did Roan sign-away her soul to Whart (like Lilah)? Why/how is her brother working there, and what has he been doing? Did they contract together? If she's so far "just" been a common criminal, why does GJ have such a mad-on for her capture? etc.

edit to add:
Confusion/Contradiction? When introducing Roan, you suggest she hasn't killed anyone because you said,

"What she didn't get from her father was the willingness to do away with human life....In all her criminal career the need to murder had never come up."

...yet later you have Dr. Director tell Buffy,

"...we can’t afford to lose anymore men, we can’t send anymore letters home.".
Comments from author:
Thanks for catching that for me. I'll read over it and see what I did and how I can fix it. *Edit* I found it, don't worry it's all part of the big plan, but I can see how it confused you. Thanks for telling me what's got you interested in it and what you'd like to see explained more thoroughly.

P.S.

I have not forgotten 'It takes a bit of Faith' if you're still interested in that. And Thank you most of all for taking the time to read my story
Review By [draconis] • Date [16 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "An odd detail" from Dusel
Review:
Can't wait for more! Especially what the twist of the plot will be in the end.
Comments from author:
Sorry for taking so long to reply. And I'm glad you're enjoying it. If you're wondering why I'm taking so long to update To Kill, it's because I've been working on all the major plot points. And now I know most of what happens and a general sense of why it happens. Including the twists in the end. I hope I don't clue you all in to soon.
Review By [Dusel] • Date [5 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Time before Dawn" from Squeallikeapig
Review:
This is intriguing. I cracked up with the whole nemesis part. After the trio, I can never see that word without giggling. Its sounding as if Dawn will end up being her daughter since technically she's only four. I don't know though, they used Buffy's blood to make her - which is how Buff was able to close the portal. Then again, I loved Joyce and I would hate for the girls to find out that really isn't their mother. I don't know if Faith ever had a good maternal figure other than her first watcher that was killed. I don't know who I would rather be her daughter - I'm horrible at making decisions - grr.
Comments from author:
I know what you mean, so many characters in the Buffy universe come from disjointed if not cruel homes and you just want to give them a family who would love them. It'll be tough, but no matter who I unveil as Beatrix's daughter I think all the characters in the story will have gained some type of positive relationship from Beatrix. Including Beatrix.
Review By [Squeallikeapig] • Date [10 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Time before Dawn" from Dusel
Review:
I really like this story, the main character - Beatrix Kido is so different from what one would normally see in TTH, a cold-blooded, iron willed, assassin. The mix is just so refreshing and intriguing - the scenes, the interaction...I hope you post several more chapters by the end of the night like you did first time.
Comments from author:
I really wanted to see how the two characters would act. A trained killer and a slayer, some who is trained to slay demons, but also to protect human life. Although I do believe that Beatrix is an assassin of iron will I don't think that she is completely cold-blooded, and I don't just mean in relation to B.B. or even Bill. I think that when it comes to fighting for her life, or going out to kill some random person that she is cold-blooded, but I think that when she had to go and kill the group of people she was closest to that it did get to her emotionally. I don't think she necessarily trusted or loved them but I do think that there must have been some type of pseudo-twisted family dynamic albeit a dynamic held together by thin string. At the wedding practice she was as surprised as anyone of their attack. Maybe she didn't think they'd find her, but then again she'd known them long enough to know that they'd be able to do so. I think when she got her revenge it was an eye for an eye, and that's what kept her going. By the end of the story she was reunited with her daughter, but she was sprawled out on the bathroom floor. I don't know, maybe I've got it wrong.

But we'll see where the Killer vs Slayer aspect goes.
Review By [Dusel] • Date [10 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I left my heart in a Sunny Hell" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
Interesting
Comments from author:
I'm glad you thought it was interesting enough to comment. Thank you!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [1 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Odd hours" from (Current Donor)Tempi
Review:
Looks like the story is picking up pace. I look forward to reading what comes next.
Comments from author:
Thanks for coming back to read, and for commenting.
Review By [(Current Donor)Tempi] • Date [28 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vanished" from AllenPitt
Review:
ok, the separate plot threads are weird...will be fun to see how they all intersect. Have to admit I wonder how buffy or faith would fare in a fight with Kiddo--
Comments from author:
I'm glad you're still reading the story. I wonder how Buffy or Faith would hold up in a fight with Kiddo too...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [20 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vanished" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [20 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Something in the air" from Morgomir
Review:
Nice new instalment. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for coming back to read, I really appreciate it.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [15 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "There goes the neighborhood" from AllenPitt
Review:
Kiddo really is up there with slayers in terms of skill--not as much in strength of course. But hey, she's got that palm-strike death technique... thingy. So... hoping Buffy is B. B. (somehow). But ya never know...
Comments from author:
True . . . ya never know. Thanks for the review.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [20 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Doctor's In" from Morgomir
Review:
Interesting way to go. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you, hope you keep reading.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [20 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A villain by any other name" from JediKnight
Review:
Interesting job on this story, please add more.
Comments from author:
Working on it. I'm glad you find this story interesting.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [19 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A villain by any other name" from (Current Donor)Tempi
Review:
Well this sure looks promising. I'll be watching eagerly for more updates.
Review By [(Current Donor)Tempi] • Date [4 Mar 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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