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Review of chapter "The Slayers Dollhouse" from Harry
Review:
*Shakes head* Typical of you QT. If things aren't done your way, you will wait and then strike and destroy everything and rebuild it in YOUR image! QT, you have a ego that is going to be in for a SERIOUS shaking!!!
Review By [Harry] • Date [3 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from angelus
Review:
Awesome ending you know you should do a sequel afterall Alexis Denisof was on an episode tonight maybe you can find a way to work Wesley in :)
Comments from author:
Yes I saw Alexis and squealed. I was waiting the whole night for him and whiskey to accidentally meet, LOL. I would really love to do a sequel for this but so far my muse is asleep on this one, but you never know it could wake with a fury one day. Thanks for the review and I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [angelus] • Date [26 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from kaekae
Review:
good story - the only thing I have an issue with is her name didn't follow the Doll's naming scheme. Summer isn't part of the phonetic alphabet. Uniform, November, Zulu or Juliet (do they have a juliet already?) would have fit better.
Personally, I like India. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you I'm glad you like the story. I'm sorry you lost me with the phonetic alphabet thing what is all that? Am I being a ditz here? :{


Okay just looked up the whole alphabet thing I am a ditz I knew about all that but for some reason (no brain cells, LOL)
didn't know it was called PA. and that that's what they were using in the show, Duh.

What do you think of Kilo for her it kind of reminds me of how Buff tried to keep Dawn being the key on the down lo. I think I'll use that.

Thanks so much for your review.
Review By [kaekae] • Date [25 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
I think this doesn't need a sequel...leave it open to the imagination...brilliant ending to a brilliant story!
Comments from author:
Yes it could be left there, but sometimes those evil bunnies go digging it up again. That decision lies solely in their evil paws, LOL. Thanks for the review and I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [25 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Showdown" from eriktheviking
Review:
Somethings can't be erased. Great chapter, thanks.
Comments from author:
:)) Thank you I'm glad you like it.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [15 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Showdown" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Brilliant! This should totally turn into a Connor/Dawn/Spike pairing...that would work for everyone! And think of Angel's reaction when he finds out Spike is with Connor! Lol! This story has been very enjoyable! I have enjoyed reading this a lot! I'm kinda sad next chapter will be the last...but then maybe you could write something Connor based- remember my challenge! Hint hint! Lol!

How are you liking Hit or Misplace?
Comments from author:
Thank you I'm glad you like it. And I'm not sure if Connor would be so much into a threesome he seems possessive of his women. And Spike would value his life to much because Angel would surely stake him bring him back to life torture and stake him again LOL.

I'm in the process of reading the prequel to Hit or Misplace. Kinda got caught up in trying to finish The Slayers Dollhouse. Promise to finish it real soon and start on your request. :)) Thanks for the awesome review.
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [15 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Crumbling House" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Wonderful story! Poor Connor having to deal with Hotlz and Quor-Toth again...
Comments from author:
Wow and Thanks. Yes but at least he has some closure in that department now. Thank you for the review.
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [12 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Crumbling House" from DarkLady
Review:
yes! willow to the rescue! cant wait for the next chapter!
Comments from author:
Yep, Angelus is in for quite an ass whoopin. ;-))
Review By [DarkLady] • Date [24 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Loves Survival Game" from draconis
Review:
Good story, and some very good ideas and plot elements. Looking forward to more.

But, it's a bit like plot salad without any dressing...a lot of things thrown together too fast, and it was a bit difficult to follow at times.

Just my thoughts...but I think if you took more time with each element and developed them a bit more fully, and then worked to provide smoother transitions and a more cohesive structure throughout the story, it would be much improved and more enjoyable.

A couple examples:
I thought using Ethan's body as a misleading element (making us think it was Giles) in the early part of the story was good, although it was a bit unbelievable that Giles would so easily forgive Ethan. It required a lot of suspension of belief on the part of the reader to handle that. Then you described 'Ripper' as a powerful mage (which was also a good plot device)...but then you simply had Giles suddenly delivering a message to Ballard via Millie...again, how Giles pulled that off just wasn't there, leaving the reader to fill in a lot of details.
Review By [draconis] • Date [9 Jun 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Loves Survival Game" from angelus
Review:
Wow Angelus really drove Holtz crazy what a psycho nutball. Poor Dawn hopefully she's not dead. On a happier note glad Dollhouse was renewed :)
Comments from author:
Yeah, I can't seem to write him any other way especially since he has been in a hell dimension for his crimes against Angel and his son, that would drive him completely bonkers don't you think. And as for Dawnie well you'll just have to wait and see. Dollhouse forever. Even though I personally didn't like the way they portrayed Alpha in the finale, but that's just because I have other ideas he he. more to come soon I promise. Thanks for the review.
Review By [angelus] • Date [26 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Ripper Dilemma" from btvsfrk
Review:
i just read all 10 chapters in one sitting...this is really good!!! it intertwines buffy/angel/dollhouse in a really original way! the buffy/paul pairing's really interesting too....can't wait for update!
Comments from author:
Wow in one sitting. I'm glad you like it and I'm working on the next chap as we speak. Thanks for the review.:)
Review By [btvsfrk] • Date [3 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Ripper Dilemma" from JediLaSombra
Review:
Problem- why would such information such as who is really behind the dollhouse be in an active's mind? The most they would know is either their handler, Dominic, or Adelle.

Quentin is arrogant but he is not stupid enough to imprint such info into an active with telepathic demons in existance. If anything he would have imprinted someone like Robin Wood or just Wolfram and Hart as the main culprits rather than leave such a blatant target painted on his head(figuratively speaking)... unless he knows about the scoobies plans and is playing with them.

Hmmm, intriguing. keep up the good work
Review By [JediLaSombra] • Date [26 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Ripper Dilemma" from angelus
Review:
Poor Giles its a pity we never learned more about Ethan and Giles's old days as teenagers on the show I still hope they eventually do that Ripper miniseries I've just about given up though :(
Review By [angelus] • Date [26 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Ripper Dilemma" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [25 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hell Dimensions and Soul Interventions" from angelus
Review:
Wow Holtz is several shades of crazy
Comments from author:
Isn't he though and it will only get worse. he he.
Review By [angelus] • Date [9 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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