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Review of chapter "The Man Who Broke The Bat" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Pretty freakin dark for a Xan-man story! Good though! Got any more?
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [27 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Man Who Broke The Bat" from TheFoxBoss
Review:
For his outfit, how about the one from 'The Batman'?
batman. wikia. com/wiki/Bane_(The_Batman)
Review By [TheFoxBoss] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Man Who Broke The Bat" from TheFoxBoss
Review:
Definitely awesome, how about giving Xander Armstrong's gauntlets from FullMetal Alchemist?
Review By [TheFoxBoss] • Date [24 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Man Who Broke The Bat" from djhardim
Review:
Good. A couple of comments -

"It was a weaker but longer lasting version of something called Miraclo that someone called Tyler came up within."

Good tie-in with the Hourman character.

Technically, wouldn't Xander already have dual citizenship, since both of his parents were Americans?

Edit: I was thinking about Waller's threat to have him deported.
Comments from author:
Yes, but not all nations care about such things. Only the nations that would receive a backlash from the UN or something similar would observe those laws, not a third world nameless South American country that was amazingly corrupt even in the comics. No big country would risk war over one citizen, a dozen maybe but not one. They would just cover up the fact it happened due to embarrassment.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [27 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Man Who Broke The Bat" from Venomlord
Review:
You are one of the few who do this, make Xander into a anti-hero, and you do it well. I hope you will update soon.
Review By [Venomlord] • Date [13 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Man Who Broke The Bat" from Mechconstrictor
Review:
Nice story. I've not seen one like this before. Hope to see more of it.
Review By [Mechconstrictor] • Date [5 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Man Who Broke The Bat" from KingDarius
Review:
Another good story. liked the yu yu hakusho reference too. i loved that show when they first started showing it on cartoon network when i was a teen.
Review By [KingDarius] • Date [15 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Man Who Broke The Bat" from Venomlord
Review:
Dear god I love this story... Actually I have read two of your stories so far Slade and this I hope you will update both.
Review By [Venomlord] • Date [27 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Man Who Broke The Bat" from LordSia
Review:
Awesome. Great finisher, was getting a bit annoyed at X-man being a junkie. I hope you'll continue this, or at least open it for others to work on. You get a minus for making it too short though.
Review By [LordSia] • Date [20 Dec 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Man Who Broke The Bat" from Morgomir
Review:
Very good story. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [17 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Man Who Broke The Bat" from Robby
Review:
Cool fic!! Can't wait for more! Don't think anyones done bane before.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Robby] • Date [24 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Man Who Broke The Bat" from LFW
Review:
Nice touch with Waller.
Although, I always liked the Suicide Squad better . . . it just seemed more honest.
I am looking forward to more.
Thanks
Comments from author:
Yeah, I like the Squad too, but Waller is more recognizable with JLU and Batman Beyond and all.
Review By [LFW] • Date [17 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Man Who Broke The Bat" from Fyrloche
Review:
Well, it's about time. Of course, I have no room to talk when I've got one story that I haven't updated in a year and another I haven't updated in two! Great work. I look forward to more. (Hopefully, you'll have another chapter of your Dogma crossover up soon. Watched it again the other day and got me to missing your story, so I re-read it.)
Comments from author:
I just what I can when inspirations hits. A writer is a slave to their own inspiration and I have spent many nights trying to write a chapter for that story, but it just hasn't hit me yet.
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [17 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Man Who Broke The Bat" from lordamnesia
Review:
Awesome new chapter! That's a fairly big twist with him going into Cadmus, and a HUGE boost for them. Keep up the great work!
Comments from author:
Thanks, I tried to surprise ya'll.
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [17 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Man Who Broke The Bat" from JediKnight
Review:
Very interesting job on this chapter, hope to read more soon.

When will you be bringing in Faith?

How many chapters before Bruce is better?
Comments from author:
Thanks.

Pretty soon. She escapes prison and has super strength. Do the math.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [17 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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