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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from mendal
Review:
I find it really hard to believe that the star sapphires represent love unless its a twisted corrupt love. Especially after reading the part where the guardian tell dawn how they are willing to "enslave" members into their ranks.
Review By [mendal] • Date [11 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Obsidian
Review:
AWESOME!
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [11 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from MarcusSLazarus
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Good idea in theory, but let down by two crucial factors;
1. Drusilla restoring Angel's humanity had SOME potential, but the fact that you just ignored any reference to it in the aftermath let that down.
2. All that stuff about Xander being able to control multiple emotional spectrums is giving him WAY too much credit...
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [20 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [9 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from JediKnight
Review:
When will Xander be back? Please don't kill him in the sequel.
Comments from author:
He will come back in the sequel and no I'm not going to kill him off.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [6 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from BlueEyedJedi
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Sad that Xander Died. (Or Did He, Drusilla is a seer, and she saw the return of her Kitten, so......) But he died the way he would have wanted protect the ones he loved. In the vastness of the DC Universe, there are many ways for him to return. So cheers to the White Knight, he's to good to stay dead under the circumstances.

Peace
Comments from author:
Ion-Embodiment of Willpower
Parallax-Embodiment of Fear

If those two emotions have an embodiment, it would only be logical for the other five to have them as well. Both Parallax and Ion were kept in the Oan Central Battery. With the Zamarons accumulating the violet energy of love in their Central Battery, it would only be logical again for a similar entity such as Parallax and Ion to exist there as well. Xander just happened to be the unlucky idiot to get thrown into the Central Battery.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [6 Jun 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Origins, Part One" from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
Since I first read of him, I have Hated the character Mongul. To my knowledge he has never completely, utterly defeated. He has failed to succeed in his plans, but he has never been decimated, broken, or had a decimating defeat. I'm Glad that he will now. Now that the Queen and Dawn are safe, some of the Star Sapphires come come back to help. Carol Ferris before her return to the light was a devastatingly ruthless foe, who given the incentive of protecting those she cares about, could give Xander a match in ruthless ferocity, upon their mutual foe Mongul. As I previously stated I really don't like Mongul.

So the JLA has discovered Sunnydale, Hmm, I suspect things will get more difficult for the big bads who come to town.

Great story, it's amazing how in just a few chapters, concepts can be changed, refined, made fresh, and new. I anxiously await each new chapter.

Peace
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [3 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fate of Love" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [3 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fate of Love" from chaostime
Review:
i am so enjoyig this fic i hope it goes on or has many sequals
Review By [chaostime] • Date [3 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fate of Love" from JediKnight
Review:
Interesting chapter, though the story seems like it'll be too short. Is the any chance you'll be doing a sequel to this? Please do your best to add more soon.
Comments from author:
I will be doing a sequel.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [3 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fate of Love" from djhardim
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Good Bye Green Lantern, hello White Lantern (all colors of the spectrum).

I would say Angel blames himself for Angelus because it was his drunken behavior as Liam that led to him being turned by Darla.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [3 Jun 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Aftermath" from lorwen
Review:
I like this story...
It's good, and solid...
more please :)
Review By [lorwen] • Date [2 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Aftermath" from TweedWizz
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My argument mate would be Angel feels guilt for Angelus' crimes because his body committed those acts. HOWEVER, without his soul he's a completely different person, and unable to control what he does (at least until Noxon ret-conned that in Season sux).

Angelus should have been killed the moment he rose.

However Angel isn't Angelus. Don't get me wrong, there's plenty to bash Angel for, his entire Sunnydale conduct is suspect, the way he comes onto Buffy, the way he only appears to do good to impress her.

But Angelus and Angel are two entirely different people.
Review By [TweedWizz] • Date [1 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Aftermath" from TweedWizz
Review:
I have a few problems with the relative harshness on Angel, yes he's a jerk but blaming him for Angelus' crimes as you almost do is a little harsh. However I do like your outlook on Ms. Summers and suspect this story is going to involve far more of Sunnydale than just the Scoobies, and stories like that can often be interesting, so kudos for that. Look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Question, if Angel is not to blame for the crimes of Angelus, then why does Angel himself try to atone for said crimes?
Review By [TweedWizz] • Date [30 May 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Aftermath" from JediKnight
Review:
Very interesting update, I'm looking forward to reading more.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [29 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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