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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from banditdoz
Review:
I love this story I laughed out loud about the rhinos so thanks for that and I laughed again when Shela went to see remus.
I can't wait to see what jessy is and how the group finally get rid of all the crap in the wizzarding world
Comments from author:
Now that Sheila knows Sirius is in town, things are going to get *interesting*. ;-)

And more will be revealed about Jesse in the next chapter. If my muse cooperates, and lets me finish it. ;-(
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [7 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from twlight
Review:
Oh wow. I love this wonderful wonderful part of this series! I love how Harry but Fudge in his place in both the Wizmont(?) and in the atrium when the butt munchers attacked. I do have to wonder if anyone is going to fix those wards so that something like that doesn't happen again. I love that Molly didn't get permanently injured and that Grayback and the siblings are dead sooner then before and in such messy ways! I have to say that I hope Malfoy sr. is permanently hurt in the mental way from his attempt at invading Xander's mind. I love all the different names that you are giving Tom and his minions it is always interesting to see what you can come up with!
Comments from author:
Things have been busy on the homefront, and I'm just now getting to answering reviews. ;-(

Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Don't worry too much about Malfoy - he'll be getting everything he deserves, in spades, eventually. Besides, he's fun to beat up on. ;-)
Review By [twlight] • Date [27 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from superfan
Review:
Baru'ch Ropheh Cho'lim- That was the mangled spelling for a Hebrew blessing for the sick.

It means: Blessed be the one who heals the sick.

As for the story: You make me happy, Thank you.
Comments from author:
Thanks. ;-)

Trying to get the next chapter to this one completed.
Review By [superfan] • Date [21 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from SpacedCadet
Review:
I hope eveything works out for you!
Comments from author:
Thanks. ;-)
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [24 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Please WRITE FASTER!!!
Comments from author:
Since my wife is currently seriously ill, I'm not writing much of anything at the moment.

And when I do write. it's at whatever pace my muse tells me to go at.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [23 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed the story so far, and I think you'll love what's coming up in the next few chapters. ;-)
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [5 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Wonderful story and series, I look forward to seeing where this goes!

Tom.
Comments from author:
Thanks. And it's going far, FAR beyond the realms of sanity, and will probably end up in the vicinity of my current neighborhood. ;-)
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [4 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from trongod
Review:
Got your answer re: Xander's loves... and I /choose/ to consider that the future stories based out of Babylon 5 are entirely due to the fact that the ladies I mentioned were off on another mission when the aliens raided Xander's family, so he took - actually, was forced to take by - Buffy and Anya, so there!! {sticking out tongue in a totally adult manner...}

Lame, yes, but as I said, really a fan of the Xander/Faith/Cordelia linking...

But really happy that the Muses are back whispering - or screaming, whichever works - in your ears, providing us fans and acolytes with the wondrous and amazing fruits of all your imaginations...
Comments from author:
Well, in our minds and possibly elsewhere in the multiverse, anythings is possible, so your idea is quite feasible.

In any event, I'm not going to let this one go unattended the way I did, so you can expect to see another update in the not too distant future.
Review By [trongod] • Date [15 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from cmdruhura
Review:
Love the way things are going. However, Xander really should have upped the fear factor before knocking the Ferret out. Having Malfoy actually pee himself would ensure the lesson stayed with him for a long, long time.



EDIT:
Is it ethical to play Wack-a-Mole with a ferret?
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed this chapter.

And the plan is to gradually up the fear factor as far as Malfoy and his supporters are concerned, by slapping them down harder each time they stick their heads up out of the hole in the ground they're hiding in. That not only ensures ongoing amusement, it also allows far more public humiliation. ;-)
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [13 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from lordamnesia
Review:
I love this story, and it only seems to get better with time! Keep up the excellent work!
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing, and I definitely intend to do just that. ;-)
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [12 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from banner
Review:
OK. Lots of movement in the plot. I like the development between Willow and Jesse. This is such a great series for when I feel vindictive...
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying the story.

And yes, this is definitely a 'rain hellfire down on my enemies' kind of story. ;-)

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [banner] • Date [12 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great update.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I appreciate the good words.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [11 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from trongod
Review:
Most excellent to see you return to The Continuing Adventures Of The Time warriors, as I like to describe it to The Boss. Besides hoping that Xander gets together with Cordie, Faith , or BOTH - for the WIN!!! - I wonder if this Jesse is something like an Immortal a la Highlander... although supposedly earlier scars remained after their Quickening, I think...

Be that as it may, I really like the way your taking this, and poor Sirius! Then again, if he has a half brain and any consideration at all, he'll ask if his estranged kinswoman would like to be re-instated to the Ancient and Noble House of Black; there's gotta be a Gringotts analog/branch in L.A. at least that he could go to for this. Being honest about his concern for Willow and Jesse, as well as Cordelia, /might/ help, but it depends upon how screwed up the elder Rosenburgs are - which considering they routinely abandon their daughter /on the Hellmouth which they are fully aware of, no less!!!/ can be answered by 'Totally batsh*t crazy', I'd say...

Whether she wants back in or not, Sirius needs to get in touch with Andromeda and start weening Dora away from M.O.B.'s Flaming Chicken Club ASAP, and getting the Tonks' back into the A.a.N.Black is also a good start. Besides, Harry and the rest can always use more kinfolk.
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying the story.

As I've noted in other responses to reviews, Jesse is most definitely not a Highlander Immortal - he's something else entirely, and hints will be dropped in upcoming chapters as to what that 'something' might be.

Xander is not going to be hooking up with either Cordelia or Faith. If you haven't read the other stories in this series yet, I suggest you do so, so you can learn who he does end up with.

Sirius is going to be discussing things with Sheila and Ira very soon, and I'll be attempting to explain why Willow ended up essentially abandoned by them in canon. I will say that Sheila is not going to be very receptive to the idea of Willow attending Hogwarts, anytime soon.

Other developments with regard to the House of Black will be shown in upcoming chapters.
Review By [trongod] • Date [11 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from wonderbee
Review:
Great to see the gang continuing to be more proactive here, as well as hanging onto their sense of humor, while looking forward to the next tweak they do to Dumbledore, who looks like he's about ready to stroke out before its said and done.
Comments from author:
Ragnarok is going to get *very* proactive in the very near future, and is looking to shake the Wizarding World to its very foundations. ;-)

Albus isn't going to be lucky enough to stroke out. ;-)
Review By [wonderbee] • Date [11 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from ChaosLady
Review:
Excellent update!
Comments from author:
Thanks. I appreciate your reviewing and commenting.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [10 May 13] • Not Rated
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