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The Saint and the Prince of Gotham

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Review of chapter "The Silk Market Road" from DieselDriver
Review:
What I don't understand, two things really, why she didn't try to find the Wayne's and why they didn't apparently try to find her. For her side, she's freaking smart and so should have at least thought to run back to where she'd been happy. For their part they are freaking rich so they could have hired, WOULD have hired private means to find her anywhere in the city as well as getting more than the usual "help" from the official channels such as police.

Story is kind of intriguing especially since I have no idea who anyone except Bruce is along with his butler and no idea about what his family was like. Never was much of a Batman fan but I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this. Oh yeah, heard of "Ras" etc. only in other fan fictions here.

Edit per your reply: Oops. Oh yeah, 7. Forgot that. I remember getting lost when I was 8, about a millennium ago. Sat on the curb and cried till my parents found me.
Comments from author:
I'm in the process of severely overhauling this story. But I will tell you that shortly after she ran away, the Wayne's would have died so there's that to consider why any investigation might have been lost or postponed and forgotten.

secondly, Barbara thinks she's responsible for that boys death and she's afraid to go back; afraid that she'll be wanted for murder or something. She's smart, but she is also only like 7 years old.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Great Divide" from DieselDriver
Review:
I'm curious why you are switching names back and forth:

"Sabrina cried out again as she was left dangling from a few fingers. Quickly, she moved her hand back to grip onto the ledge. Mistakenly, Barbara"

Where did the name "Sabrina" come from?

Edit per your reply: Other fandoms? Any suggestions?
Comments from author:
Bahahah! Thank you for bringing that to my attention! I use Liv Tyler as a model for a different character in a different fandom whose name is Sabrina. I got the two mixed up obviously I will fix the next time I'm at a computer!
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [9 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of story "The Saint and the Prince of Gotham" from Dragonelf
Review:
This story looks very good so far and I hope that you one day will get inspired to add more chapters to it.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Shepard's Pie::

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a book is the fire itself.
- Mark Twain
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Comments from author:
Mmm Shepherd's Pie!

Well if you see the below response, I've definitely got some changes in the works, it's just a matter of implementing them and getting a new chappie out! Hopefully I'll be able to do both soon!

Thanks for reading and the Shepher'd Pie! Cheers!
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [3 Jul 12] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
Review of story "The Saint and the Prince of Gotham" from alynambered
Review:
Only just came across this story and I like it a lot.

Hope you continue this sometime soon.

Did your story plan include naming Barbara's parents? Inquiring minds want to know.
Comments from author:
Yes, I do... In fact, my plot bunnies have been chipping away at my brain and there're quite a few changes I plan on making in the very near future. Hopefully for the betterment of my story... More updates soon hopefully!

TTH will only let me post a certain amount of a non-Buffy-crossover story though. I have to have more crossover stories first so hopefully I can get out a chapter on one of my other stories soon so I can get another one out for this! It's just a matter of time, though. Hopefully I can have something soon for you! Thanks for reading! Ciao!
Review By [alynambered] • Date [1 Feb 12] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
Review of story "The Saint and the Prince of Gotham" from Eureka
Review:
I love how you pictured Babette! I am so glad that you got a new chapter out, and that it seems at least that Bruce and Babette are going to get along great.
Looking forward to the next chapter..
Comments from author:
Thanks darlin'! I'm so glad you're still reading and enjoying looks like! ;) I love the feedback, and thank you so much for your input!

It's not gonna be all sunshine and roses though I assure you. Rest assured the summer will be full of good times and fun outings, but also there'll be angst and arguments/fights a plenty!

All around good times! Hope to have next chap out soon!

Thanks doll, lots of love!

Cheers! =^.^=
Review By [Eureka] • Date [11 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Edit Comment
Review of story "The Saint and the Prince of Gotham" from Eureka
Review:
Very good. Eagerly waiting on next chapter...
Comments from author:
Thanks love! That's really good to hear! Glad you like it! More coming soon!

Cheers! =^.^=
Review By [Eureka] • Date [23 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Edit Comment
Review of story "The Saint and the Prince of Gotham" from SamDragon
Review:
I like.
Comments from author:
Short and to the point! Thanks so much! I'm very pleased you like it! Thank you!!
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [30 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Edit Comment
Review of chapter "St. Barbara's Abbey" from fathajorj
Review:
Interesting start. I'm quite intrigued to see where you take this.
Comments from author:
Thank you fatha! I hope you like it! I'll try to not disappoint! Thanks for reading!

Cheers! =^_^=
Review By [fathajorj] • Date [26 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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