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Review of chapter "Finders Keepers, Loosers Will Be Ripped Apart!" from azulkan
Review:
Glad to see the update. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Review By [azulkan] • Date [16 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "There's A Crack In The Universe" from MistofRainbows
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Okay... the hellmouth isn't intelligent and sure as hell can't follow people through a spell like that... the Q are gods. Poof gone... sigh... I think I'll see the door here. 13 or 14 decent chapters... finding out that Willow is the doctor's daughter was weird but not unexpected given the story title... then there is the crap with Faith knowing Klingon and being some Klingon's soul partner and the nerfing of the Q that could easily see the problem and snap their fingers and fix it. The hellmouth isn't evil incarnate, it's a break in the worlds. The slayer was created by magic users... not some natural balance or crap. This is where it all falls part which is sad because I had been enjoying things.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading. Sorry I threw you out of the story with how I see and perceive things. My muse was going places with this hopefully I can explain where I'm going for my other readers as I go along. Thanks for your constructive criticism Mist. :)
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [15 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Way of a Warrior" from MistofRainbows
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I'm not real impressed with the Faith and Warf angle. I can't see her knowing Klingon as you have things set up. I can't see there actually being mystical bullshit with his religion such that she would know the words... maybe it's just me but I think this detracts from the story, a story that's already a little out there...

That said, I've enjoyed several other aspects of the story so far. I'm a bit sad that they haven't ran into Ted yet... that would have led to interesting situations with Data.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [15 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Finders Keepers, Loosers Will Be Ripped Apart!" from JediKnight
Review:
Interesting work
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [14 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Finders Keepers, Loosers Will Be Ripped Apart!" from CageFire
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Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [13 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Finders Keepers, Loosers Will Be Ripped Apart!" from raxadian
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Well, they had just to screw up another universe, right?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [13 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Finders Keepers, Loosers Will Be Ripped Apart!" from AllenPitt
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Kind of surprised Dr. Crusher hasn't sat down and talked to Willow yet. Hopefully "Q" has some answers for everybody. Starting to look like Willow will be staying in the ST:NG universe. Breaking up the scoobies. Unless they just decide to stay en masse?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [13 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mirror Mirror On The Wall" from raxadian
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Well, is a valid question!
Review By [raxadian] • Date [23 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "There's A Crack In The Universe" from raxadian
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Anya, you had to screw the universe, didn't you?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [23 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Way of a Warrior" from raxadian
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Ah, looks like they won't return home anytime soon.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [23 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mirror Mirror On The Wall" from draconis
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If even the Q couldn't take on what's coming, it should be amazing to see how Buffy et al manage to take it out.

I think you need to slow down the Big Evil's growth rate. If it continues to expand at an exponential rate it quickly will be too vast for any Slayer-based forces to oppose...unless of course the Shard of Stronnos can be somehow used to convert the evil "energy" no matter how big it gets (although that seems like it would be too convenient). But then...what to do with all that mass (think E=mc^2 and it might be a problem..or is it evil "mass" converted to energy? But then problem becomes what to do with all that energy)

Thanks for the update.
Review By [draconis] • Date [23 Mar 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Walk to Remember" from raxadian
Review:
So, Faith is brainwashed?
Comments from author:
lol, caught that did you. :) Just a bit of fun that I couldn't resist.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [23 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fear and Loathing" from raxadian
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those two... together?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [23 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unanswered Questions" from raxadian
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Ah, what a bloody mess with time travel and magic...
Review By [raxadian] • Date [23 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Let Slip The Dogs Of War" from raxadian
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A Klingon slayer would be something terrible and feared all over the universe.
Comments from author:
OH YES!
Review By [raxadian] • Date [23 Mar 14] • Not Rated
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