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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
Well, the bit with Rose having amnesia and getting 'picked up' like that was a BIT of a stretch, but otherwise it worked; I can certainly see SOME 'Dollhouses' operating in this manner (Even if the one in the main series was 'considerate' enough to get people to sign willingly first).

Add in what the Doctor did to them in the end by making the Dollhouse heads experience EVERYTHING they made everyone else do, and I think it's safe to say you did a good job; DEFINITELY something to make those bastards think...
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed. I wrote the cross as a request, and couldn't figure out any other way to get Rose there, so... they were a bit more unscrupulous than the US version of the firm... and I thought that was fitting with the Doctor, he didn't kill them, but he did make them pay.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [23 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Awesome. Great use of Dollhouse.

Wait, why did she have amnesia when they picked her up?


Nice form of justice. Poor people who couldn't live with themselves as they had been/were now...
Comments from author:
No one knows ~grins~ a car hit her running to the store, nothing exciting, horribly mundane either... but Rose didn't know, the Dollhouse wasn't really capable of saying,and the Doctor, well that was the least of his worries.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [13 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mcspender
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" The Doctor: No! 'Cause this is what I'm going to do: I'm going to rescue her! I'm going to save Rose Tyler from the middle of the Dalek fleet! And then I'm going to save the Earth! And then, just to finish off, I'm going to wipe every last stinking Dalek out of the sky!
Dalek 1: But you have no weapons! No defenses! No plan!
The Doctor: Yeah! And doesn't that scare you to death? Rose?
Rose: Yes, Doctor?
The Doctor: I'm coming to get you".

The Dollhouse is gonna feel the rage of the lonely god, indeed.
Cool fic, see ya!!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [10 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
Review:
That's a new way (as far as I've read) to get the Doctor and Rose together. Interesting.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [10 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Well done and filled with AU-ey goodness. So between Shags Rose plans to get the Doctor to muck up all the other dollhouses in the organization?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [10 Aug 09] • Not Rated
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