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Review of chapter "You'll Be Wrapped Around My Finger" from Dragonelf
Review:
I like what you have done so far with the story and I hope that you some day will get inspired to add more chapters to it.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Princess Cake::

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"I am Grey. I stand between the candle
and the star. We are Grey. We stand
between the darkness and the light."
- Delenn, Babylon 5
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [2 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You'll Be Wrapped Around My Finger" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
*sobs* Why are you such an awesome writer? Xanny is adorable!
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [21 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "You'll Be Wrapped Around My Finger" from named
Review:
Up to chapter 5 I was just reading this story going hmm, sounds alright, no real clarity on how Xander got from Giles bath tub to the lake or what happened to Buffy or Sunnydale. Chapter 6 I had to grin a little at Xander's frustration. I am looking forward to more chapters but also admit that I hope they focus on Xander a bit more.
Hoping to see more soon
Named
Review By [named] • Date [23 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You'll Be Wrapped Around My Finger" from GarnetAvi
Review:
Omg, I love this story. I just came back, saw it and decided to reread it. The I saw it's been over a year since the last update and I got sad. I hope you come back to write more on this sometime. I'm anxiously awaiting what happens next with Liz and Hellboy, and Xander, and Spike, and Kendra and Faith and Dawn.....
Review By [GarnetAvi] • Date [13 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You'll Be Wrapped Around My Finger" from nicktorilove
Review:
Please I beg of you! Don't stop writing this story! It has all the ingredient's for being the best OC Xander that I have found, and I love it.
Review By [nicktorilove] • Date [18 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "You'll Be Wrapped Around My Finger" from Tamda
Review:
So, this fic decided to take Badass as a primary class skill.
Whyfor is it then not being worked on anymore?

Because this fic is to badass what air is to breathing. I was never a huge Hellboy fan, but DAMN now I wanna go read the comics and watch all the movies! And amy I just ponder what Red and Kendra are going to do to the initiative when they find out *Xander* is being risked to the initiative??? Probably one of the things that made them set Xan man up in the ass end of nowhere to keep him safe?

Also, DAMN CLIFFIES!

And I vote Xan lets out his inner Alexander, and does tell Hellboy what for, or Liz does it for him. *Evil grin*

Also: You said slashing Xan would be evil in this... Uhh hmmm uhhh Any realtionship with Young!Xan would be evil. But, hullo, nice Wounded!Evil!Spike down in lockup to be all broken and wierd with... and oddly, They both would probably be better off for some mutual care. Both could be the strong one for the other, very Spike/Dru/Spike of them.

Also Also: I really do hope your classes and IRL stuff gives you time, and inspiration for this. I sooo wanna nominate it for next year's CoA.
Review By [Tamda] • Date [27 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "You'll Be Wrapped Around My Finger" from Anonabliss
Review:
This is so very interesting!

I like how you've woven the worlds together with consequences that were all but ignored in Buffy, not to mention how one person's absence/change can change so many events. The voices are believable and in character with the people they are now without eliminating who they were. I love the fact that Kendra is given more of a personality, heck, I love the fact that she was allowed to grow a personality. I can see how Buffy herself would be taken out in mutually assured destruction with Angelus. I bet that was one beautiful battle.

The glimpses that we have been given of this changed past makes this a very rich AU and, frankly, makes me want more. I do hope that you are able to continue this story as it deserves to be finished. (And I kinda want the scene where Faith and Hellboy meet.)
Review By [Anonabliss] • Date [1 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "You'll Be Wrapped Around My Finger" from MerKat
Review:
Xander the naiad is so cute and such a great idea! I want more water spirit Xander please. Pretty please with sugar on top? How did Xander end up with his lake?
Review By [MerKat] • Date [13 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You'll Be Wrapped Around My Finger" from shichan
Review:
Please, update.... when you have time... please
Comments from author:
Fear not. I'm plotting a synopsis for later chapters in my spare time...y'know the few seconds here and there where I'm not being hounded by work, professors, and extended family bearing turkey and pie. Gotta run; just want to know you weren't abandoned and December should be glorious.

C.E.
Review By [shichan] • Date [20 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "You'll Be Wrapped Around My Finger" from shichan
Review:
Luv cute Xander!!!!!!!! Well, Xander had a crap childhood; now he has a 2nd chance and a new papa to boot! :D
Review By [shichan] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "You'll Be Wrapped Around My Finger" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
--Hellboy felt himself freeze. And people thought he was the one in the couple who wore the “I can end the world” pants.

That's an excellent phrase ya have there, and not one many couples can claim :D
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "You'll Be Wrapped Around My Finger" from DarkKitten
Review:
This was amazing. Keep up the good work!

*~*Dark Kitten*~*
Review By [DarkKitten] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "You'll Be Wrapped Around My Finger" from RevDorothyL
Review:
The First Lady on speed-dial because she was an old friend of the family from Peace Corps days was excellent, but my favorite was the "Superman vs. Batman" as sigh-worthy objects for young Slayers discussion (really nice insight about Charles Gunn as the equivalent of Batman for a Slayer in need of an ordinary guy who could keep up).

I'm trying very hard not to imagine Xander's naiad side getting frolicksome with Superman, though.
Comments from author:
Lex Luthor all the way, baby! (kidding)
It would be too cruel to Xander to emasculate him and then stick him in a slash relationship. I don't think his fragile male ego could take it...

Glad you liked,
C.E.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You'll Be Wrapped Around My Finger" from Morgomir
Review:
Love the Bioschock reference. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "You'll Be Wrapped Around My Finger" from GothicBianca
Review:
All I have to say is please update again soon.
Review By [GothicBianca] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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