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Review of chapter "Friday" from TharzZzDunN
Review:
Awww, these were fun if a little disjointed around the sixth chapter. There were parts that were set up better in the following chapters that lacked the wider focus.

Still having fun reading about Luna!

Cheers!
Review By [TharzZzDunN] • Date [15 Dec 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Friday" from laoshi
Review:
Friday is a crime against civilisation.

What was the incident on the train Raicheal was talking about?

There is an episode of Hollywood Babble On where Ralph Garman sings Friday in the voice of a special needs girl who works at Mcdonalds. Its horrific.

Nice job potterizing the lyrics.
Comments from author:
Basically, this is just inserting Ráichéal into book six and beyond; the ride to Hogwarts in HBP includes Romilda indirectly insulting Luna and Neville by trying to get Harry to come hang out with cooler people (herself included). I don't think Ráichéal would have been as passive about such a thing as Luna was.
Review By [laoshi] • Date [3 Mar 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In My Head" from laoshi
Review:
Dark magic and gum disease? Curse them!

All good relationship decisions should be made by how mad they’d make Ron Weasley. Those that don’t make Draco mad that is.

I read Tango and my mind immediately jumps to Luna and Hermione re-enacting the classic care to tango moment from True Lies. Where’s a rose when you need one.

Luna can call it whatever she likes.

Tango always leads to kissing, they should make it one of the fundamental laws of magic.
Comments from author:
I work for a ballroom dance studio, so I thought it'd be fun to incorporate that into a story somehow.
Review By [laoshi] • Date [3 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Katy Perry Moment" from laoshi
Review:
I’m just saying right now I hope drunk Luna is even more fun than the sober variety.

House Traitor how dare she admire the furnishings of other houses.

Who knew Luna was such a sweet talker… no wait she’s just blown it.

Ah ha a Ruse! Tremble before the fiendishness of Luna’s machinations.
Comments from author:
Luna's a sneaky one. Maybe she should be in green and silver? Or is Ravenclaw right because she was smart enough to come up with that plan?
Review By [laoshi] • Date [3 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coming Back Around" from laoshi
Review:
I'm unfamiliar with the fandom, but I don't think it really matters all that much.

I do hope Draco doesn't give Luna indigestion.
Comments from author:
How to Train Your Dragon. The titular dragon is a Night Fury named Toothless.
Review By [laoshi] • Date [3 Mar 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blackout" from laoshi
Review:
I love Luna’s explanation of how she met up with Thor. I can just imagine them singing Norse drinking songs.
Comments from author:
They probably went out drinking and wenching together.
Review By [laoshi] • Date [3 Mar 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In Your Eyes" from laoshi
Review:
I've never seen say anything do you think I'm terrible?

I don't think I've run across your OC Fay. Is she in anything else?

Nice ficlet. I'm on to the next.
Comments from author:
Fay is actually movie and game-based; she fills one of the two "Hermione's missing roommates" slots that Rowling kept promising us she'd explore but never made good on.
Review By [laoshi] • Date [1 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Power of the Sun" from laoshi
Review:
What’s this? The golden trio doesn’t fall at Luna’s feet just because she’s that awesome. For shame.

I like the idea of them never having met.

Nice little cameo by Lara. I always enjoy your OCs.

Power Girl Luna is fantastic.

I like the you shot my hair moment with the gloves.

Hermione should get some kind of medal for noticing the hair when she’s dressed in that outfit.
Comments from author:
She should get a medal for noticing Luna has a head when dressed in that outfit...
Review By [laoshi] • Date [1 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Agent Elle" from laoshi
Review:
of course what football team she supports is the most important thing.

Agent Elle is a brilliant idea, turning the obliviator corps into the men in black is a nice way to mesh the fandoms without having the whole Luna was really a secret agent this whole time moment.
Comments from author:
It's like Wormhole X-Treme and a bevy of other ideas in canon of other series: the best way to maintain secrecy is to give the public a modified version of the truth... even if that "truth" is presented as fiction.
Review By [laoshi] • Date [1 Mar 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Come With Me…" from laoshi
Review:
"The damage to my organic sheath was greater than I thought. Bother. That will take considerable time to regenerate."

Definitely my favourite line.

So in this time line John Connor told her anecdotes of his time with Uncle Bob in the future.

It’s a Brilliant idea and well executed.
Comments from author:
It's that fine line: you want her to be a bit cold and robotic, but also inject little bits of Lunacy into her dialogue as well.
Review By [laoshi] • Date [1 Mar 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Katy Perry Moment" from feynstrom
Review:
Hermione finally gets what's coming to her. Excellent.
Review By [feynstrom] • Date [19 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blackout" from BaileyMatutine
Review:
What do STRIKE and WAND stand for?
Comments from author:
STRIKE is canon; Special Tactical Reserve for International Key Emergencies.
WAND is my own invention and I'm currently holding at Wizarding Antagonism Neutralization Department. Might mix it up before I reuse it or am forced to commit an answer to a fic somewhere.
Review By [BaileyMatutine] • Date [15 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Coming Back Around" from BaileyMatutine
Review:
Wait, doesn't Harry now need to defeat Luna to become the Master of Death?
Comments from author:
Or does Luna need to rob Harry to become the Mistress of Death?
Review By [BaileyMatutine] • Date [15 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Katy Perry Moment" from BaileyMatutine
Review:
I actually hate artificial cherry.
Comments from author:
Yeah, but there's some good organic cherry chapstick out there. My girlfriend owns it.
Review By [BaileyMatutine] • Date [15 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In My Head" from BaileyMatutine
Review:
Just wait until a moderator reads this.

This kind of shameless nonsense should be a ban-worthy offense.

Review whoring? Really? Well I for one shall not participate.
Comments from author:
Actually, I think the last major review whore to come through the site got Best New Author in 2009 or 2010...
Review By [BaileyMatutine] • Date [15 Feb 12] • Not Rated
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