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Review of chapter "Defictionaliser" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Good stuff, made me chuckle.

DaveT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [1 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Defictionaliser" from LordCorwin
Review:
No no no no no no .. this is so wrong. so very wrong. The smeg head shouldn't even have been granted a wish .. BAH! ... I still liked it.
Comments from author:
I'm not sure if a vengance demon has any choice in whether to grant a wish or not.
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [1 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Defictionaliser" from Vilkath
Review:
Not bad only real downside besides being so short I suppose is some the logic problems in it. It is a vengence wish, not a 'what ever you want genie' type of wish yet almost Rimmer's entire wish was about making himself better only a few side line things about his brothers and Lister were thrown in there. Add that to fact she's more a patron of scorned women.. Rimmers not even alive and it's a pretty big logic hole. Though I suppose it's why it's only a one shot and not something longer.
Comments from author:
Rimmer would see making himself great as vengance against the universe at large for making him what he was. As for not being a living woman, when there's only 2 humans still in existence, you can't be choosy.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [30 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Defictionaliser" from FourThreeNineUK
Review:
Brilliant, only downside is that it wasn't long enough, could have been a script from the show, well written
Review By [FourThreeNineUK] • Date [30 Sep 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Defictionaliser" from eriktheviking
Review:
I had to laugh. Great concept.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [30 Sep 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Defictionaliser" from (Current Donor)Speakertocustomers
Review:
Smoke me a kipper, I'll be back for breakfast!
Review By [(Current Donor)Speakertocustomers] • Date [30 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Defictionaliser" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Well done!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 Sep 09] • Not Rated
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