Review of chapter "Chapter" from DarthTenebrus
Well written. I like the build toward the end, as touching as the ending in the movie itself. Just not as heartwrenching...
Review By [DarthTenebrus
] • Date [18 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter" from romero
I enjoyed your story even though I never watched 'Knowing'
Review By [romero
] • Date [3 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter" from CPTSkip
I really hated the movie, but I like your story.
Review By [CPTSkip
] • Date [2 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter" from KzintiKiller
Pretty good. At least your aliens had more brains than the movie's aliens did. They sent an adult along. I just found it inexcusably callous and stupid that they'd take such and obtuse roundabout way of delivering a warning. Then wait 50 years. Then only take children. No adults to look after them. Nothing of human civilization to give them a history. Just children, dumped on a hostile planet to go feral?
Why are so many fictional aliens always morons?
Review By [KzintiKiller
] • Date [2 Nov 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]