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Little Red Riding Hood.

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
Very enjoyable and funny. I'm giggling now. Thank you!
Comments from author:
Thank-you, I enjoyed writing it!

D.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [19 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from smolder
Review:
This was just wonderful to me. So much fun. The lines I just loved loved loved:
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"f her magic didn’t work a bullet between the eyes usually did the trick. Of course if she did happen to miss she’d still be able to beat any attacker to death with the heavy pistol."

And about the "Mob":
"She could deal with most things by herself; but it was traditional and it encouraged community spirit."

Great writing.
Comments from author:
Thank-you, the fic was fun to write!

Dave.
Review By [smolder] • Date [8 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BuffyKaibaHunt
Review:
Brilliant! I like the story of Little Red Riding Hood. And I've heard of how it has a warning of the saying called "stranger danger", which I understand very well.

Anyway, awesome job writing this! It's really neat.
Keep up your creative, very brilliant and ingenious writing! :)
Comments from author:
Yes, Little Red... was fun to write. Thinking up the awful German names.

I like fairy tales, they often pop up in my fics- see Goldilocks and the Three Bears in my fic 'The Slayer of Verona' for example. There's also various FT's in my 'Buff Barbarian...' series.

Thank-you very much for your kind review.

DaveT.
Review By [BuffyKaibaHunt] • Date [1 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Strange but cute.
Comments from author:
Thank-y0u!

DaveT.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [25 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PiedraLumbre
Review:
That was pretty funny. I'm not sure whether I liked Johan and the town dominatrix, Willow in the dirndl, or the 'angry' mob the most, but they were all great.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed.

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [PiedraLumbre] • Date [24 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)jrabbit
Review:
Lots of laughs as always - good to see such a polite well behaved angry mob.

However, I must admit, the bit that really made me smile was an ambiguity brought about by a missing comma: "generally speaking wolves didn’t talk"
Comments from author:
Thank-you, are you sure it was missing?

I think the the world would be a better place if there were more 'polite' angry mobs.

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [(Moderator)jrabbit] • Date [23 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Review, the Next Generation:

I happened to watch the Princess Bride last night and suddenly realized your story would fit perfectly into the PB universe. Now I am wondering if W&K just might run into The Other Wesley, Buttercup, or even Prince Humperdink some day. If they run into PH, having a friendly Angry Mob along might actually be quite nice. Lol!
Comments from author:
I think I saw TPB years and years ago, when I was in Germany which would make it the 70's (but I could be wrong) and my recollection of it is hazy to say the least and possibly mixed up with other films. However, we may get a chance to look into this once I've finish writing all the other stories I've got planned...that'll be in about 2012! You never know it might give me something to do while I'm trying to ignore the Olympics!!!

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [23 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Silea
Review:
Ohh, it's a wonderful story. I liked it starting from the setting ending to the characterization.

The best part was the description of the "Angry Mob". When I read that I was laughing so hard I almost chocked on my coffee I was.

"The ‘Angry Mob’ stood around chatting amiably with their pitch forks and torches stacked neatly against the wall of Kennedy and Willow’s house.

...

With cries of alarm the ‘Mob’ reached for their weapons and started to gesticulate and try out a few angry cries. Kennedy didn’t really need the help of an Angry Mob, even the rather good natured one that had assembled outside her house. She could deal with most things by herself; but it was traditional and it encouraged community spirit."

I really, really like your Angry Mob, enough that I'd join in if I could.
Comments from author:
Thank-you the 'Angry Mob' was one of my favourites too.

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [Silea] • Date [23 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Speakertocustomers
Review:
A lot of fun!

You keep saying 'lightening' when you mean 'lightning'. *Inigo Montoya* "I do not think it means what you think it means." */Inigo Montoya*

Am I a bad person for having hoped that Willow's gun would fail to fire and that Kennedy and the mob would arrive too late?
Comments from author:
I'll check back on that probably a slip of the finger.

And yes you are a bad person for thinking that...shame on you...no really, shame.

You know I've been thinking about Hansel and Gretal, did you read about the school play where H&G got arrested for antisocial behavior? Now that has possibilities!

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [(Current Donor)Speakertocustomers] • Date [23 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BarbarossaRotbart
Review:
Funny, but those german surnames are the pure horror. Change them!

Willow wearing a Dirndl is really something cute.
Comments from author:
Either you can read German or you looked them up...all I can say is He-He!

So that's (dirndl) what that style's called, and yes I thought it was cute too.

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [BarbarossaRotbart] • Date [23 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Now THAT was a fractured fairytale. I'm just not sure what to write about your bizarre and funny story. I enjoyed it, but I just have to ask one question. Were you on drugs when you wrote this? Just wondering, but if you were, it must have been some good s**t. Lol!
Comments from author:
No this all came out of my drug and alcohol free mind...which in a way makes it more worrying!

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [23 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from leelaa
Review:
Hilarious. And adorable.
Comments from author:
Thank-you so much :-)

DaveT.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [22 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Tempi
Review:
Very funny little story. You should do more from the Brothers Grimm.
Comments from author:
Generally I sometimes put a fairytale in as part of a longer story (eg, Slayer of Verona for Goldilocks and the Three Bears). But this one sort of wanted to be a stand alone story. I shall see how the muse takes me.

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [Tempi] • Date [22 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mcspender
Review:
Ah, the joys of living in the bavarian country: good ales, good sausages and good dominatrixes.
And yeah, there's the ocassional troll & wannabe pimp talking wolfs, but nothing that a good shooter, an slayer or a polite angry mob can solve =).

Waay too funny one shot, and thanks for the christmas gift mate =).
See ya!!!
Comments from author:
Thank-you, glad you liked.

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [22 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
Strange and amusing, well done.
Comments from author:
Thats me, strange and amusing!
Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [22 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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