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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from theunixer
Review:
Great job.

You handled Buffy's introduction to them about the nightlife without an emotional disaster while still conveying a bit of awkwardness at the same time.

Buffy is finally looking to see Xander as a romantic interest and Xander is finally aware of Willow's love for him. Buffy, of course knows this. Instead of having the three of them acting all socially conventional (which all too many fics do), wouldn't Buffy suggest that they both date Xander at the same time, without any competition? As in a date is with all three together. They already know their lives are not conventional, so why should their love lives be so?

Both Buffy and Xander could point out to Willow that she is bi, not gay. Is there any reason Buffy wouldn't have more than friendly feelings for Willow as well (I like to think that Buffy's lack of response to Faith's overatures in canon was more due to her rebound from Angel and less due to pure hetero orientation)? With a bit of time, like after a date or two, they could become a romantic threesome. It would be rather less of a Xander's Harem type than your Heading To The Stars series (please, please continue it as well!) and more of a true trio.
Review By [theunixer] • Date [22 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from WillowPiper
Review:
Awesome!!! This story line just moved up to my top 5 ... You are doing a fabulous and I can not wait for more!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing and letting me know you enjoyed it. ;-)

I'm trying to get more in the way of updates for all of my stories done.
Review By [WillowPiper] • Date [5 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Past Donor)boo
Review:
This series is just so fun. Any chance of you continuing the story? I can't wait to see what happens when Harry and hermione and the scoobies get together.
Comments from author:
I'm definitely continuing this one. I just have to get my muse to cooperate. ;-(
Review By [(Past Donor)boo] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Cateagle
Review:
I'm really looking forward to when the two story lines come together and Harry & Hermione Potter "drop in" to help Buffy and friends. That kind of power could seriously upend a lot of established plans and change a lot of fates; I can't wait to see it *wicked grin*
Comments from author:
The two groups will be meeting eventually, but there are a lot of things that the Scoobies are looking to accomplish before that happens, and you'll see the beginnings of those plans in the next chapter. ;-)
Review By [Cateagle] • Date [16 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Harry
Review:
Well, the memory spell has been carried out. Now, its up to the trio and any others that they bring in, to make sure that the future that Buffy showed them DOES NOT HAPPEN!
Comments from author:
Yes, indeed. The future is now theirs to mold as they wish. ;-)
Review By [Harry] • Date [19 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Harry
Review:
Well, history has been changed somewhat, with Jessie not getting turned, and Amy starting on the path of being a good magic user and not a dark one. But, there is still a lot more that needs to be done.
Comments from author:
The former history of Sunnydale has now officially been flushed down the toilet, and *everything* is up in the air, for everyone and everything interested to mold as they desire.
Review By [Harry] • Date [19 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
Review:
Sunnydale. The place where one of the Earth's Hellmouths is at. Now, its up to Buffy to make sure that the future she is trying to create comes true.
Comments from author:
Yes, indeed.

As Sarah Connor carved into that tabletop, 'No Fate, But What We make For Ourselves!'
Review By [Harry] • Date [19 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from yuiop
Review:
Nice
Comments from author:
Thanks. ;-)
Review By [yuiop] • Date [7 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from WCSII
Review:
... have you ever completed a story that wasn't a one shot? I mean, I've tried sloughing through the crap ton of so far either one shots, or unfinished stories... and well, like I just said, *unfinished*.
Comments from author:
I write what I feel like writing, when I feel like writing it.

If other people enjoy it, that's simply a bonus. Stories will get finished when they work out that way, as dictated by my muse.
Review By [WCSII] • Date [1 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from loretta
Review:
this is a good story
Comments from author:
Thanks. More to come - hopefully soon.
Review By [loretta] • Date [11 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Good chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Hopefully, more soon.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [2 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Current Donor)Blackswordzero
Review:
Great story!
Comments from author:
Thanks. Hopefully, more of this one will be appearing soon.
Review By [(Current Donor)Blackswordzero] • Date [1 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from ChaosLady
Review:
Excellent update!
Comments from author:
Thanks. The next one won't be nearly as long in appearing.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [27 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from DireSquirrel
Review:
Yay! It's always fun to get more of this. A part of me is still looking forward to having Harry and Hermione show up at Sunnydale.
Comments from author:
Harry and Hermione won't be showing up for several chapters yet, since the Gang are going to be addressing the Big Bads' status before they can get a chance to prepare themselves.

Check the dates in the various chapters and you'll have an idea about when they'll be showing up.
Review By [DireSquirrel] • Date [25 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Cateagle
Review:
Yeah, it's getting interesting now that Buffy's got some folk to back her up. It should get right interesting as she combines Slaying with what she's learned from Hermione's memories. I daresay Sunnydale is going to become a much more interesting place shortly. Methinks a number of folk are going to be horribly surprised at how things seem to go awry for them.
Comments from author:
There are a *lot* of implications about all of the Scoobies having access to the memories Buffy received, and I'll be showing them in upcoming chapters.

Needless to say, the bad Guys aren't going to be accomplishing what they did on the prior timeline, unless they are prepared to go to a great deal of additional effort. ;-)
Review By [Cateagle] • Date [23 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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