Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Luna
A Zorro cross, very fun.
Just to let you know, El Nombre es Felipe = His name is Felipe.
What you'd want to say is:
Me llamo Felipe (They call me Felipe)
Soy Felipe (I am Felipe) --> Both mean the same thing.
If you want some help with flavorful Spanish words I'd be happy to help you out. Puedo hablar espanol, vive en Espana por un poquito tiempo, y me encanta el idioma. (I can speak Spanish, I lived in Spain for a little bit of time, and I love the language). I'm not fluent, but I know some. And I love stories with some espanol flavor in them :)
Comments from author:
Thank you so much - I will go rewrite it.
I won't be creative anymore - I am just going to use words that the TV show used.
Review By [Luna
] • Date [28 Jan 10] • Not Rated