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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Harry
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Mara Jade, eh? Sounds like the plan that Leia and her lover had hatched is backfiring on them even as we speak.
Review By [Harry] • Date [30 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
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*Starts playing Imperial March* So, Leia fell to the Dark Side, and now Luke is trying to figure out how to stay alive, as well as how to bring her back. Sounds interesting.
Review By [Harry] • Date [30 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from BrownFinderth
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I know it's been most of a year since the last chapter was written, yet, I cannot but hope that more of this fascinating story of extra-dimensional travel continues to be posted!!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [14 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from JCHatten
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Great part. really liked to see what happen next. :D And R5 scream in terror over having a backupmemory was hillerius. :D


Love to write some more. :D
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it hatten and yeah I loved the little scene with the R units and the R5 bit, I hope to get the next chapter started soon, then send it to hawklan for his part of it. thank you for your help in doing the training parts of this story, maybe you will consent to add some more later on. I look forward to your next part for Knight No More(Razial)
Review By [JCHatten] • Date [16 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from darthridian
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great update mate, Dawn again has a nice little adventure and someone once again help her get out of a sticky situation, hopefully when she is trained up more she can get herself out of those situations herself.

boys and their toys hehe that will always be around, keep up the great writing guys and hope to read more soon.
Review By [darthridian] • Date [6 Jan 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from darthridian
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another very good addition, with all the allies gathering at the planet will we see the rebellion soon send some people to be trained there too?

keep up the good work mates, and hope to read more soon.
Review By [darthridian] • Date [12 Nov 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from darthridian
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great addition mate, looks like another master is about to join the group, just wondering why the force ghosts did not contact him first before bringing in the scoobies.

hmmm, maybe the rebel alliance should be renamed the force rangers. :D

keep up the great writing guys.
Comments from author:
glad you are enjoying the story so far, the reason why the force ghosts did not detect him is stated in this chapter, he created a force shield around himself that stopped him from been sensed by anyone else. (razial)
Review By [darthridian] • Date [6 Nov 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from darthridian
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another good addition mate, just wondering could the jedi's on the hidden planet have children who could not access the force but were like the Force Guardians, like Squibs in the potter verse, they could not use magic but they could still percieve it.

If the hidden planet did have them but they did not know how to train them the 2 Guardians could train up a hell of a lot of back up for the up and coming Jedi from the planet.

great work on the explanation of the jedi forms and also the interaction of the characters.

keep up the good work mate and hope to read more soon.
Comments from author:
thank you for the nice review and hmm good idea and certainly a thing to think about. (Hawklan)
Review By [darthridian] • Date [30 Oct 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from unknownreader
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you really need to go back and correct your grammer. Also it kind of seems like your very young in your writing. You have great ideas but the presentation drives me away. I really like the knight verse and was the only reason I was reading this story and you actually almost turned me off of it.
Review By [unknownreader] • Date [30 Oct 10] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from darthridian
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oh man i almost feel sorry for the new trainiees, hmm Han might get a laugh at their training, that is until Rona and Buffy train him up to be a force ranger.

keep up the great writing mate.
Comments from author:
Han trained as a Force Ranger??? Hmm somehow that idea has never entered my mind.....thank you for that *g* So nice when readers give us even more evil ideas..if u have more, feel free to share *g* (Hawklan)
Review By [darthridian] • Date [22 Oct 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from DarthPayne
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Oh man, i am VERY glad that i'm not Kyle right now. :)
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [16 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from darthridian
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oh man i almost feel forry for Kyle, but then again who better to teach him that former students of his counterpart.

keep up the great writing mate, hope to read more soon,
Review By [darthridian] • Date [16 Oct 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Eureka
Review:
More please...
Pretty good story, haven't read what it comes from,but I just might try to find it. (After I catch up on all the stories I am behind on reading and reviewing.)
Comments from author:
ah you really should try JCHatten's Knight story's. If you like Xander and Star Wars they are just fun to read.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [16 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
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I really love this story so far and I hope to read much more of it, just a shame a lot of people seem to ignore it.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [29 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from JediLaSombra
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Interesting start although I would like more about how Leia fell to the dark side.
Review By [JediLaSombra] • Date [28 Jun 10] • Not Rated
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