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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MzShadowfang
Review:
This is an excellent story, very sad. Although, I don't think Jack would close his eyes to Buffy's struggle, especially when there's a very high possibility of her getting killed. But other than that, I really enjoyed reading this:)
Review By [MzShadowfang] • Date [26 Oct 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Callista
Review:
This is so sad. I liked it, although I'm not sure Jack would ever deliberately close his eyes for something like that. He isn't one to close his eyes and pretend everything is ok, especially where his family is concerned. Still, beautiful story, thanks for posting!

Cally
Review By [Callista] • Date [16 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SpacedCadet
Review:
An excellent story...but very depressing!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [20 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Xovervore
Review:
I have just been rereading this story - and it is still a powerful tale. A thought occurred to me when I was at end part of story - that Jack would probably want, or more accurately feel the need, to meet Giles. Even if he doesn't want to do this, it might become unavoidable, if, for example, Buffy is seriously injured. This could be something to put in a sequel.
BTW I am also now giving this story a recommendation.
Review By [Xovervore] • Date [14 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RandomSelection
Review:
Wow, your fic is real intense,
I hope the rhyming thing makes sense,
poor Jack, who sees what no one should,
and wants to help - I wish he could!

But it's the Slayer's destiny
to always fight, never will she
grow old and have a family.

You showed how those nights really are,
a truth that one too rarely saw
back in the television show.
I thank you, for you made it so!

Great story! is the final shout.
Great story - I'm now signing out.

:-)
Review By [RandomSelection] • Date [14 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from leelaa
Review:
Damn good.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from pezgirl
Review:
Wow, I've never really read anything 'Buffy centred', but this is really good

It's sad that she doesn't have her scooby gang with her; is this because they're in Colorado Springs? If Giles and Buffy never went to Sunnydale it would make sense that they'd never met Willow, Xander and Cordy.

Either that or she's just visiting her dad and really does slay in Sunnydale; but the scoobies are dead.

Hope there's a sequel :)
Comments from author:
Thanks! Yeah, there's no Scooby gang because they're in Colorado Springss and she lives with Jack. And I'm trying to work on a sequel even though it reads as a prequel right now. It's rather irritating. Jack and Buffy are kinda stubborn xD
Review By [pezgirl] • Date [28 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker
Review:
Damn that was freaking awesome!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! Hopefully the ones that follow will be as good xD
Review By [(Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker] • Date [27 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AngelaM
Review:
Oh poor Buffy. Clearly she didn't have the scooby gang in her universe.
Comments from author:
No, in this universe she has Giles and that's it. Poor her :(
Review By [AngelaM] • Date [27 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from clarityfades
Review:
Great story & interesting idea...I wouldn't mind seeing a sequel or twelve. ;)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! And you never know. There may be a sequel or twelve xD
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [27 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from GypsyWitch
Review:
beautifully written. very poignant, great job!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [GypsyWitch] • Date [26 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Darksidhe
Review:
That was really good. I love the way that Jack sees the pain in Buffy's eyes? Is it more obvious because she doesn't have the Scoobies to back her up? Is Giles still her Watcher?
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! Yeah, she doesn't have the Scoobies in this AU and Giles is her Watcher.
Review By [Darksidhe] • Date [26 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)HiltonK
Review:
Very good.
Not usually keen on things written from this kinda perspective but it works well.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [(Past Donor)HiltonK] • Date [26 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from immortalbliss
Review:
I don't know what to say other than great job! I like it, you really conveyed Jack's feelings in regards to Buffy's Calling.. His reactions are on the mark, I feel..
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! I was worried that some of it might be a little off.
Review By [immortalbliss] • Date [26 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Morgomir
Review:
Great piece. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm considering making it longer and turning it into a series.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [25 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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