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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
oooh... that's just... devastating!

Blue
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [3 Jul 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AngelaM
Review:
Ooooh nice. Short, sweet, in continuity, awesome.
Review By [AngelaM] • Date [8 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SongBirdie
Review:
Oh, my goodness! This is amazing. The idea that all of season four was the result of Anya granting Ziva's wish, is just... wow!

I love the fact that Anya makes an exception for this wish, that there is so much heartache and pain it's probably one of her masterpieces. And the fact that it's emotional and mental pain that causes all of this heartache, not violence is very insightful. Words and actions can hurt far more than someone's fist.

Ziva was very bitter in this. I found it really interesting that she knows Tony has a heart, but she's not pleased he plays with hers. You did a really good job of showing that Ziva loves Tony, but, hell hath no fury than a woman scorned.

This is just such an original idea! I feel so bad for Tony. You did an amazing job with this! Keep writing!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much, you have no idea how much this review means to me!
Review By [SongBirdie] • Date [8 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written mental rather than the normal physical Anyanka solution.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [8 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from littleoldme
Review:
Very nice twist-- the idea that Tony's relationship with Jeanne might have been the result of a vengeance demon granting a wish is too good!
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [8 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from twlight
Review:
Wonderful and so very very true.
Review By [twlight] • Date [8 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from winddancer
Review:
Your take on Tony and Jeanne is quite good, and original. I am a fan of NCIS and BVtS and the story of Tony's love affair with Jeanne was very emotional on the first show and absolutely fit with the second. Excellent job author, excellent job!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much!
Review By [winddancer] • Date [8 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dmitri
Review:
That was a frightfully evil story. Anyanka probably got a commission for doing this wish. Groovy (in a bad way) all the same.
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [8 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Greywizard
Review:
Excellent! A perfect explanation for Tony's actions in Season Four.

Great work.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [8 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ramenth
Review:
Oh my, that is very evil, and yet very good.
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [8 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RubyPaladin
Review:
I like it. You did rather well.
Review By [RubyPaladin] • Date [8 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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