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Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from maxthehobbit
Review:
Another funny episode. I was a little let down that there was no action with the Sappho's and never figured out what the marrow was, have to reread this sometime. Still it was good. Thanks for posting.
Comments from author:
Sometimes a marrow is just a marrow.

Sorry there was no wild Sapphist action but that was basically how the sketch finished.

Don't forget 'Red Dawn' where our heroes get their crowns.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [22 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from RafMereC
Review:
Great as always.
Bravo.
Raf.
Comments from author:
Thank-you muchly.

DaveT.

PS, Thanks for the Rec!
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [2 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from JoeDineen
Review:
Fun
Comments from author:
Thanks,
DaveT.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [1 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from Mcspender
Review:
There's nothing better than kicking zombies to make things come to a very pleasing end (Teh hehe, come teh he hehehe!!=P).
thank you for such insanely funny fic dude =)!.
See ya!!!.
Comments from author:
My pleasure.

Dave.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [1 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from batzulger
Review:
Insane as always. The duo that can and do are awesome.
Comments from author:
I aim to please, thank-you,

DaveT.
Review By [batzulger] • Date [1 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from (Current Donor)Tempi
Review:
Great story. You should do some more fairy tales with Dawn and Faith in this series. They make a great and funny duo.

I look forward to your next story.
Comments from author:
Fairy tales are a great source of xover ideas, I'm surprised more people don't use them. Even the de-fanged Disney versions are good for a laugh.

Other stories in this series? Well, officially the series has finished...but the girls did spend a year or so in 'the Shattered Kingdoms' before they 'became Queens by their own hands'. So, who knows? If something pops into my mind we'll see where it leads us.

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [(Current Donor)Tempi] • Date [1 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from Mcspender
Review:
“Wow!” Gasped Dawn.

“Gings!” Giggled Hazel.

“Will ya look at the size of that!?” Faith exclaimed really impressed".

Don't tell, the prince name is Biggus Dickus, and the girls are admiring the size of his... nose??=P.
By the by, have you seen the "No Ordinary Family" series?, looks cool.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
I shall look into this,

Cheers,
Dave.

Just had a look, and I gotta say no; I live in England and don't actually watch broadcast TV anymore...its mostly crap and I object to paying £140+ a year for a TV license just so the TV companies can make even more crap! The wonderful thing about not watching broadcast TV is that you get an awful lot of more interesting things done, I recommend it to everyone. I do of course watch DVD's and watch episodes of new series 'by other means'.

D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [30 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from Mcspender
Review:
Nicee, I always liked a nice rabbit stew for dinner =D!.

Cool chapter, see ya!.
Comments from author:
Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [28 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from (Current Donor)Tempi
Review:
Well if you don't have a Slayer armed with meteoric iron at hand, then you'll have to settle for the "Holy Handgrenade of Antioch".

I look forward to the next chapter.
Comments from author:
The girls finally reach the enchanted palace...after some 'bridge building@1

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [(Current Donor)Tempi] • Date [28 Sep 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
OK, I guess there weren't many other options with Faith in the mix, but it feels slightly anticlimactic.
Comments from author:
I know what you mean, I couldn't think of any other way of doing it without killing someone (which I didn't want to do). Perhaps I should have had a bigger party that could have stood a few casualties?

Dave.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [28 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from Mcspender
Review:
Ok, really, that guy Ohrmazd, looks like someone I knew a few years ago in an economic theory class... yep, that kind of dudes are scarily real =S.
And, ok, if it looks like a witch, quacks like a duck and floats like a duck, then's like... it's made of wood??... cool, like I totally got it!!.

Too bad that I can use that one with my former mother in law ;). By the way, is this for real http://www.telegraph.co.uk/news/newstopics/howaboutthat/8026003/Council-outlaws-mother-in-law-jokes.html ??

Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Cheers, and yes I'm sorry to say this is true. Another example of political correctness gone insane.

Dave.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [26 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five." from Mcspender
Review:
Mhhh, dare I say that Dawn was, like PMSing too??.
I mean, girl is like, pretty laid back and calm and not berserker like rage induced by one like tiny little almost lethal arrow in the chest, followed by one tiny like little bump in the head... although, like that little winy princeling brat had like totally it coming, too bad about the pesky collateral damage =P.

Cool chapter, Blood for the Blood god!!... Em, sorry dude, kinda like let meself got carried away by my 40k current character =D.
See ya!!.
Comments from author:
It would have been too easy to have Faith run wild and do the Sir Lancalot thing. But then I thought, hey Dawn deserves a bit of fun!

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [23 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five." from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
Faith and Dawnie ran away
Bravely ran away away
Brave faith and Dawnie,
When danger reared it's ugly head
etc. etc.

I loved today's typo!

"There was some sort of calibration going on"

Since I spent a large part of the afternoon calibrating equipment. I think you mean celebration...
Comments from author:
You spend hours going through these things and still they sneak by you!

Cheers I'll fix that soonest.

Dave.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [23 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Prometeus
Review:
>> missing " at end of 'one of those test things. -- it matters

> I'll have a look at the other one but I'm not sure what you're getting at.

The missing double-quote is right between two different characters speaking. So it's actually saying, grammatically, that it's the same character speaking.
Comments from author:
Yeah I realised what you were talking about as soon as I found it. It should be corrected by now.

Cheers, DaveT.
Review By [Prometeus] • Date [22 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four 'A'." from Prometeus
Review:
Awwwwww.
Comments from author:
Yes, very sad. Who knows what might have happened.
Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [Prometeus] • Date [21 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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